Young people enjoy life more than older people do.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people believe, young people enjoy life more than older people do. However, I completely disagree with this. In my opinion, In this modern era of technology, young people are not able to enjoy life as much as older people are. I support my statement with two reasons.
Firstly, In today's world, there are too many things to do. With the digitalization of the world, there are so many gadgets like Video games, Smartphones, Tablets, Computers that youngster's today do not have time to enjoy the gift of life. They just switch from one device to the other and do not have much free time. Even the classes are also held through these devices. For example, I remember, when I was ten years old, we used to go to the camping trips. We camped near the ganga river and then observed the beauty of the river with family and friends. We also played games like Hide and Seek, Cricket, Volleyball, and many more. Compare that to today kids, who are constantly busy with these electronic gadgets throughout the day. My cousin who is now a teenager is constantly surfing the internet, just scrolling through social media posts. Thus, we can see that young people today are really busy in that they don't have time to enjoy the life.
Secondly, the competition faced by today's children is much more fierce than in the past. Due to the dramatic rise in the population, children today are facing a fierce competition for the limited number of resources available. This forces them to sacrifice there life of enjoyment and comfort for a better tomorrow. For example, my father was just a high school graduate when he got his first job at the age of 19. On the other hand, today the requirement is of an advanced degree like masters or ever doctorate for getting a job. As a result, most candidates get their jobs at an age of 30. Thus, the children have no time to relax and enjoy due to there intense study routines.
In conclusion, there can be a few lucky young people who are enjoying the life more than older people. But for majority of youngsters, this is not the case. Thus, it is safe to say that young people do not enjoy the life much when compared to older peoples.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 43.0788530466 70% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 390.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57179487179 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36797197107 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 212.727598566 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523076923077 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 618.680645161 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8543847055 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.2916666667 100.406767564 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 20.6045352989 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45833333333 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.377927399752 0.236089414692 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106478108883 0.076458572812 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16868092039 0.0737576698707 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300530974228 0.150856017488 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200684157937 0.0645574589148 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 11.7677419355 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 10.9000537634 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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