Young people enjoy their life more than old people.
What is enjoyment? Enjoyment is simply the feeling of being joyous, excited and exuberant. This feeling makes people positive and optimistic about the ongoing or the forthcoming moments. In my opinion, this state of ultimate happiness is found more among the young people, rather than the old people. I have this outlook because of the few reasons which I will elucidate in the next passages.
First of all, Youngsters often are ready to try out new and passionate things which they enjoy. For example, there are various summer camps, music festival or say cultural festivals; where youngsters take part in it. To be more specific, we have this traditional festival of Ganesh Utsav, where young men and women performs dancing, or plays which shows huge enjoyment on their overall expressions. Ganesh Utsav festival is curiously awaited by many young adults every year so that they could enjoy it. On the other hand, the old people have cross all this excitement phase for the occasions, and are often observed staying at home comfortably and take rest.
Secondly, Young adults are adventurous and risk takers, and they enjoy doing this a lot. They have this concept in their mind of seeing the world before getting old. For example, a young person take out vacation and decides to visit different hill stations or say abroad destination in order to make memories. On the other hand. Old people are unable to cope up with all the traveling and exhausting trips. This is because, once a person gets old, their physical body becomes weak and starts to lose control over it. In such case, old people prefers to be safe at home, which again gives up chances of having the feeling of enjoyment.
Lastly, young adult are free of any age related diseases. They are physically and mentally fit as compared to the old people. For example, young people do not have diseases like high blood pressure, or diabetes, or risk of heart attack. They can feel any kind of high feeling of enjoyment. Whereas, most of the old people are suffering from old age diseases like diabetes, heart attack and blood pressure issue. This takes their sense of feeling excited and experiencing enjoyment to lower level. This point of pertaining physical malady indicates that old people often gives up enjoyment of life. Contrarily, Being disease-free and capable of feeling high emotions, young people enjoy their life more.
In conclusion, I would like to convey that old people somehow choose to stay safe and take care of themselves rather than go out and experience the enjoyment. Whereas, young people are outgoing and has high of enjoyment as compared to the other ones.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 26, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'often' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are often
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in conclusion, kind of, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 13.8261648746 174% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 43.0788530466 77% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 52.1666666667 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 447.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94407158837 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4445709256 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530201342282 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 684.9 618.680645161 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1573601074 48.9658058833 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8518518519 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14814814815 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 11.8709677419 168% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.433289877914 0.236089414692 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112935268143 0.076458572812 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088464734255 0.0737576698707 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251865553578 0.150856017488 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068069457927 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 11.7677419355 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 86.8835125448 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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