Many of us at least once in our life-time face the issue whether it is true that young people today are less dependent on their parents and their family than in the past or not, which one would be more accurate for us? Although some people say that is not a lie, I would definitely take a step back and say it's true. The reasons for which my prospect is based on will be discussed in detail below.
First and foremost, Young people depend on parents usually because of their knowledge. Technology provides a steady flow of information. The concept of knowledge, is a cornerstone of today's society, in fact, we need knowledge to sustain our life and without it we couldn't survive in contemporary realities. Furthermore, many of the working adults have families which depend on them and relay on their decisions that based on their knowledge.
Secondly, as the old saying goes "no risk, no reward", because successes often accompany risks, There are less opportunities for rewards without any risks. Parents usually want a safer way for their kids, take my self for example, when I was faces with two choices. One was to continue studying in the same university for a master's degree without any risk. The second was to study abroad without knowing which university would admit me. It seemed like a gamble because it was possible none of the universities abroad would accept me. My parents want me to stay in the same university. Wanting a better future, I chose to travel abroad and in doing so, I succeeded in getting admitted into a university abroad.
Lastly, from psychological aspects, Independents should contribute in building the person. As for society, preventing anyone from being independent in any area and ignoring them in their most crucial conjuncture of life, will cause many problems. This notion may cause other problems. This notion may cause many problems such as depression, alienation and also ruin their self-confidence. I personally believe , this is not good for the development of the society in the future, due to the fact that, self -confidence and positive thinking are the chief motivators of societies.
To summarize, the real situation necessitates wisdom to thoroughly weigh the pros and cons before jumping to decline the fact that young generation are more independent than before. As discussed above, I can safely come to the that conclusion and sure there is a higher chance of success. Independent is more favorable since it is the most effective way in ensuring a higher success rate and will save people undue troubles as well as assist them to prospect future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, well, as for, as to, at least, for example, in fact, such as, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2182.0 1977.66487455 110% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97038724374 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76889078845 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 212.727598566 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555808656036 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 692.1 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5393254558 48.9658058833 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1818181818 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9545454545 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265460935585 0.236089414692 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640049052658 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111800531133 0.0737576698707 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146283926082 0.150856017488 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115451276608 0.0645574589148 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 10.9000537634 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.01818996416 108% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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