Younger people enjoy life more than older people do.
The author contends the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people. I agree with this statement to some extent. As I have not performed any survey or collected data to notice which people enjoy their life, but according to my experiences I can say that young people try to engage in more activities which they like to do and what they find enjoyment in. I will provide two reasons for supporting my argument and one contrary argument which may provide support to the older people.
Firstly, older people live in a stressful environment as compared to the younger people, so they find it difficult to enjoy more as compared to the young people. As the age increases and people become older they have to deal with more number of responsibilities as compared to the younger people. As compared to office working employee who is much older than a student in college or universities, a working employee has to go through many responsibilities compared to college student. Working employee has a workload, has to fulfill needs of his/her families and many other things. But on the other side college student has less number of responsibilities they tend to find enjoyment in new things such as trekking, planning more and more number of tours to different places and enjoy as much as they can do.
On the second instance if we compare them on basis of age we can find out that as the age increases humans deal with lot of medical and health care issues. On the other hand college students deal with less health care issues compare to the older people. And less number of healthcare issues more is the way they can live their life themselves and enjoy life as they want. Older people are not able to live life on their own basis because their body might not support them as they want. For example taking a an old guy who has some problems in his/her body and might not be able to run and walk as much as the younger guy, so they have to perform activities that deal to work at home, they are not able to engage themselves in trekking or other sort of activities.
On the third instance, older people can sometime enjoy more as compared to the younger people because of the reason that they earn by themselves. Sometimes there may be a case that younger people perform activities from the money taken from their father or mother. In this case they are not able spend money as they want to, on the other hand older people who are settled with their jobs or other stuff and as they earn by themselves, they are able to spend money as they want to. On the second case older people are much more experienced and can easily plan where and when do they want to enjoy, compared to younger people they are much less experience so they are not able to plan as easily as the older people.
On the sum I would like to say that there might be some bugs in enjoying the life by younger people but they are the one’s who enjoy at the fullest.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, third, as to, for example, sort of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 13.8261648746 159% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 52.1666666667 142% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2428.0 1977.66487455 123% => OK
No of words: 537.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52141527002 4.8611393121 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81386128306 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37928640213 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.361266294227 0.524837075471 69% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 767.7 618.680645161 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.1344086022 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.7981368816 48.9658058833 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.789473684 100.406767564 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2631578947 20.6045352989 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 5.45110844103 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403162427733 0.236089414692 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.164086659717 0.076458572812 215% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.142096716092 0.0737576698707 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273966011982 0.150856017488 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722726506958 0.0645574589148 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 11.7677419355 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.1575268817 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.0537634409 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.247311828 137% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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