Your friend has the opportunity to choose either one of two types of majors (fields of study), which one of the following two majors do you think is a better choice, and why?
-A major that would allow him to finish years of study and get a degree sooner (so that he would begin to work full-time quickly). Or
-A major that requires many years of study that would provide him with more employment opportunities and offers in the future.
As of today and the years coming, having a university degree is an indispensable quality to find a job. Since people often study several years before they can graduate from a university, they have to pay careful attention to choose a major in university. Although some people may think it is useless to spend time in a major with long study period, in my opinion, the extra study years will be rewarded. As a result, I think students should choose a major that requires more years of study.
Initially, a student should have a futuristic view to choose their major. In other words, they have to think if their major has the potential to be a source of job vacancy for students in the future. To make it clear, consider a major that for the time being needs a lot of workers but is there a guarantee that the jobs offered are stable in future years? For instance, according to a report, there are a lot of jobs that will be replaced by Artificial Intelligence(AI) in near future. However, if we consider those who already have a job and need a degree to get a promotion, choosing a major that finishes as soon as possible has a higher priority.
On the other hand, majors with higher study years have more employment opportunities. This is a feature that students should consider because what would be the benefit of quick graduation if there is no job vacancy for the studied major? As employers look for more educated workers if a person does not learn enough material, he or she has to go back to the university to learn advancements in the field. So, the student should starts learning again which will be hard since he or she was away from university atmosphere and needs time to be adopted.
All in one, spending more years in university ensures better employment opportunity and security in the future and hence, a student should choose a major that fulfill these conditions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 429, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'start'
Suggestion: start
...ts in the field. So, the student should starts learning again which will be hard since...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, look, may, so, as to, for instance, i think, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 43.0788530466 56% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1554.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 335.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63880597015 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63625526753 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.50447761194 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0312931405 48.9658058833 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.0 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9285714286 20.6045352989 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35714285714 5.45110844103 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255356421913 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10333610669 0.076458572812 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060613827811 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17160098453 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417762727552 0.0645574589148 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.