In your opinion, what is the most important characteristic (for example, honesty, intelligence, a sense of humor) that a person can have to be successful in life?
In order to achieve success in life, a person must acquire many essential qualities, among which are confidence, respect, honesty, to name just a few. In my opinion, however, the single most critical quality would be optimism.
To lay a foundation for further discussion, I would like to define success in the first place. In my mindset, success in life is not measured by the thickness of the bucks you have, nor the applause you have received. Instead, it’s all about how you feel about yourself. If a person tries hard to live his life to the fullest, whether he is a farmer or an entrepreneur, he has achieved success in my opinion. Then we’ll discuss about the importance of optimism in our life.
First, no one’s life is always easy and smooth from his childhood. Every one of us faces obstacles and failures at one time or another. What really matters is to get back on our feet and go on with our dreams. Well, optimism then shows its potential. It’s the best tool to help us regain our confidence and to stick with our lives. A host of famous words have been said on the topic “optimism”. I’ll simply choose my favorite: I’m a slow walker, but I never walk backwards. The sentence from Abraham Lincoln best illustrates the critical role optimism plays in our lives.
Also, vast research has shown that optimism, which probably leads to better moods, helps a person to stay healthy in a variety of aspects. Laughing, for example, helps reduce blood pressure, heart disease, and of course fight off depression. Always staying positive and try to look on the bright side of things contribute to more laughter. In another sense, we are staying optimistic, which can really improve our health.
To sum up, if asked to choose the most important quality to achieve success (in my definition), I would definitely choose optimism, which helps us stay positive and directs us towards a better and healthier future.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, really, so, then, well, for example, of course, in my opinion, to sum up, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1633.0 1977.66487455 83% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9039039039 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74682043461 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 212.727598566 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60960960961 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.59856630824 42% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.994623655914 101% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.264082375 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.65 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.65 20.6045352989 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 5.45110844103 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 11.8709677419 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189903652329 0.236089414692 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049291655068 0.076458572812 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473963230186 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106515031844 0.150856017488 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642626654922 0.0645574589148 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 86.8835125448 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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