Is youth wasted on the young? Although some people believe that youth is wasted on the young , other believe that youth is not wasted on the young. As far as I am concerned, I can agree with later option. There are a few reasons for my choice. Young ones are deemed as the future of the world, and it is responsibility to the youth to develop as well as educate them for better service in the future. Such responsibility cannot be considered as wastage or something like wrong use. I have explained my opinion inn the following lines.
Firstly, when a child is born to a couple, parents apply all efforts to their child for development. It is a major responsibility for parent to educate their child for better future. For instance, a baby learn personality and skills from his/her parents. Baby analyse gestures and gain etiquette from his parents to behave well in a society. Moreover, I believe that a father is the best teacher than hundred schoolmasters and a mother is the first teacher of a child. So, youth always try to inchoate his young, and it is not deemed as wastage of youth. Instead it is one of the responsibility for youth.
Furthermore, as I believe that as we spread our knowledge, our knowledge definitely increases. Means that by spreading the knowledge, there is an enhancement in our knowledge. For example, a teacher’s duty is to teach his/her children for better development and he/she devout all his efforts to educate or aware the student. In addition, when a teacher delivers is skills, knowledge, etiquette,etc to the students, there is an enhancement in his knowledge level as a teacher delivers his skills in the best way as he can. In the view of this, we can hardly be said that a teacher is wasted on the children.
However, not all people are good and well educated. Some mothers encourage the father of a child to do illegal actions for the better future for her child. It may leads to a criminal offence. Hence, it may be a possibility that the father would serve life imprisonment and wastes his life for his child. In this case, the youth is wasted on the younger one, but such case is so rare to see.
In conclusion, as I believe that it is one of the responsibility of the parents to grow and educate his child by delivering relevant etiquette and personality traits, it is hardly to say that the youth is wasted. Rather than I believe that there is enhancement in the knowledge level when the youth tries to deliver whatever his knowledge or skills in the best way to young ones for better grasping. Therefore, in the view of the above opinion, I would always prefer that the youth is not wasted on the young.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 28.0 15.1003584229 185% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2194.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 475.0 407.700716846 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61894736842 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66845742379 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76543692922 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.412631578947 0.524837075471 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 697.5 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6257126435 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2592592593 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5925925926 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.74074074074 5.45110844103 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19722499507 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0645805822636 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103914007696 0.0737576698707 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116546743427 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0790943921324 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 11.7677419355 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 10.9000537634 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.01818996416 89% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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