In the 1950s Torreya Taxifolia, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya will soon become extinct. Experts are considering three ways to address the decline of Torreya.
The first option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. Torreya used to be found in abundance in the northern part of Florida, which has a specific microclimate. A microclimate exists when weather conditions inside a relatively small area differs from the region of which that area is a part. Northern Florida’s microclimate is very favorable to Torreya’s growth. This microclimate is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region’s relatively dry, warm climate. been working plant Torreya seeds in the coolest, dampest areas of the microclimate.
The second option is to move Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its Florida microclimate. Torrey seeds and saplings have been successfully plated and growth in forests further north, where the temperature is significantly cooler. Some scientists believe that Torreya probably thrived in areas much further north in the distant past, so by relocating it now, in a process known as assisted migration, humans would simply be helping Torreya return to an environment that is more suited to its survival.
The third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers. Seeds and saplings can be moved from the wild and preserved in a closely monitored environment where it will be easier for scientists both to protect the species and conduct research on Torreya. This research can then be used to ensure the continued survival of the species.
The article and the lecture are both abouth Torreya taxifoha trees. The author of the reading feels that there are three methods which can protect Torreya trees for futue. The lecturer challengers the claims made by the autho. He thinks that non of the solutons will help Torreya trees to protect for the future.
First of all, the author argues to reestablish Torreya trees in same locations. The article is mention that Torreya trees are mainly found in north part of Florida. Florida is having microclimete which is suitable for these trees grow. This point is challenged by the lecturer. She claims that those locations no not good for the Torreya trees. Furthermore, she says that the climet temparature of those aeras has been increased in past few years.
Secondly, the author suggest that Torreya trees should grow in new location. The article notes that Torreya trees have been successfully panlted in further north. The lecturer rebuts this argument. She suggets that if they grow Torreya trees in new aera it will spred fast and it will kill other trees. Moreover she gives a example of Black locus trees.
Finally, the author states that Torreya tree seeds can preserve in research centers. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that there are not enough space in research centers to preserve these seeds. Moreover she notes that these preserve seed can not address genaticla decesses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 30.3222958057 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1184.0 1373.03311258 86% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08154506438 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.314335649 2.5805825403 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540772532189 0.540411800872 100% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 419.366225166 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7855003314 49.2860985944 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.7777777778 110.228320801 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.9444444444 21.698381199 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.27777777778 7.06452816374 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185655192237 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634541711739 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054044376246 0.0662205650399 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119464010303 0.162205337803 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378224941721 0.0443174109184 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 53.8541721854 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.0289183223 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.7273730684 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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