Essay topics: In the 1950s Torreya Taxifolia, a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida started to die out. No one is sure exactly what caused the decline, but chances are good that if nothing is done, Torreya will soon become extinct. Experts are considering three ways to address the decline of Torreya.
The first option is to reestablish Torreya in the same location in which it thrived for thousands of years. Torreya used to be found in abundance in the northern part of Florida, which has a specific microclimate. A microclimate exists when weather conditions inside a relatively small area differs from the region of which that area is a part. Northern Florida’s microclimate is very favorable to Torreya’s growth. This microclimate is wetter and cooler than the surrounding region’s relatively dry, warm climate. been working plant Torreya seeds in the coolest, dampest areas of the microclimate.
The second option is to move Torreya to an entirely different location, far from its Florida microclimate. Torrey seeds and saplings have been successfully plated and growth in forests further north, where the temperature is significantly cooler. Some scientists believe that Torreya probably thrived in areas much further north in the distant past, so by relocating it now, in a process known as assisted migration, humans would simply be helping Torreya return to an environment that is more suited to its survival.
The third option is to preserve Torreya in research centers. Seeds and saplings can be moved from the wild and preserved in a closely monitored environment where it will be easier for scientists both to protect the species and conduct research on Torreya. This research can then be used to ensure the continued survival of the species.
Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they cast doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.
The article and the lecture are both about plant of Torreya. The author of reading feels that considering three ways to protect population of tree Torreya. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. The lecturer thinks that three ways are not success for protecting tree of Torreya.
First of all, the author argues that reestablish Torreya in the same location in which was in thousand years. The article is mentioned that there have specific microclimate weather condition. This point is challenged by the lecturer. He claims these cooler areas effected by issue of global worming. Furthermore, he says that now a days many areas in this northern part of Florida become dry.
Secondly, the author suggested that relocate the Torreya and move to far from its Florida microclimate. The article notes that Torreya seeds and sapling have been successfully and grow inn forests further north. The lecturer rebuts this argument. He suggests that humans grow black locus trees in this area. He elaborates on this by mentioning that these pants of black locus grow faster and kill other type of plants.
Finally, the author states that Torreya preserve in the research centers. Moreover, the article says that seeds and sapling can moved from wild and preserved in a closely monitored envernoment. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that this way is not success. He says that these preserve plants can’t face the genetically diseases and population get decline.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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... to protect population of tree Torreya. The lecturer challenges the claims made by ...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...allenges the claims made by the author. The lecturer thinks that three ways are not...
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Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...ya in the same location in which was in thousand years. The article is mentioned that th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...He claims these cooler areas effected by issue of global worming. Furthermore, he...
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: nowadays
...obal worming. Furthermore, he says that now a days many areas in this northern part of Flo...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
... worming. Furthermore, he says that now a days many areas in this northern part of Flo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ants. Finally, the author states that Torreya preserve in the research centers...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 30.3222958057 92% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 240.0 270.72406181 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19166666667 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58294351898 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 145.348785872 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.540411800872 104% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 419.366225166 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5741508274 49.2860985944 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.2222222222 110.228320801 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3333333333 21.698381199 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05555555556 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 4.19205298013 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114085468978 0.272083759551 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0383533114313 0.0996497079465 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380485427197 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0720247578127 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224852036563 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.3589403974 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.23 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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