Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Nowadays there are many types of relationship between people. Personally, I believe that always telling the truth is an important consideration in any relationship between people. I feel this way for two main reasons which I explore in the following essay.
First of all, trust is the main important factor has a good relationship. Its help to build up the strong relationship between people. For instance, if people in the working place always telling truth, it is easy to work with each of them. Also, if someone has done any mistake and he or she informs it to the head of the office, they can help him or her to make it correct. My own experience is a compelling example of this. My parents have a good mutual understanding between them. They use to speak truth all the time even it is happy or sorrow. They share all the bad and good between them. It is very convenient to them. My mother always telling to me, “speak truth always, so anyone can help or share it “. Furthermore, I have my close friend and I am always telling truth to her. Therefore, when I face some problem, she gives a good solution to sort out the problem. It is very relaxed in my mind and makes me more comfortable.
Secondly, when people telling truth for relationship, which is help to get self-satisfaction. If we tell lie in front of the person who have connection with us, we feel guilty. Then everyday we suffer from remind same reason. For instance, husband tell lie to his wife about going out with friends. After that one of the friends remind some incident in front of his wife, he feels guilty. If he told truth to his wife, he feels more relax. If he done it, he gets satisfaction honestly.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that telling truth is very important to any relationship. This is because it is help to keep strong relationship between each of them and self-satisfaction.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: used
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Suggestion: did
...to his wife, he feels more relax. If he done it, he gets satisfaction honestly. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, honestly, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 52.1666666667 82% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 336.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64880952381 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83418354591 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502976190476 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 618.680645161 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 9.59856630824 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4311276858 48.9658058833 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.48 100.406767564 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.44 20.6045352989 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.12 5.45110844103 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 11.8709677419 160% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.382442615448 0.236089414692 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108885306844 0.076458572812 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151215290527 0.0737576698707 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287070028934 0.150856017488 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14776029027 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 11.7677419355 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 58.1214874552 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.1575268817 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 10.9000537634 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 86.8835125448 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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