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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , however
... theories may lead to the Little Ice Age,however listerning material entirely challenges...
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Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , for
...lenges the statement made by the writter,for it's theories are not up to date a...
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Line 3, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , about
...s are not up to date and wrong. First,about the glaciers theory,the author consider...
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Line 3, column 17, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'glaciers'' or 'glacier's'?
Suggestion: glaciers'; glacier's
...p to date and wrong. First,about the glaciers theory,the author consider that the Lit...
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Line 3, column 32, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...rong. First,about the glaciers theory,the author consider that the Little Ice Age...
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Line 3, column 143, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...gs brought fresh cold water to the ocean,which effected the Gulf Steam Current and inf...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: But
...and influenced the earth's climate.But the listening material said the fact is...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...have such strong influenced in the ocean,it shows by the up-date research that it e...
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Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...t it effected only in Europe and America,but the water temperature in New Zealand se...
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Line 5, column 7, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...and sea has decreased as well. Second,as the volcano theory,the writer mention t...
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Line 5, column 29, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...as well. Second,as the volcano theory,the writer mention that it may because of t...
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Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , which
...y because of the volcanoes' erupted,which burst a great number of ducts to the sk...
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Line 5, column 171, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...ucts to the sky and blocked the sunlight,so that the earth's temperature went ...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Nevertheless
... the earth's temperature went down.Nevertheless the speaker says that is true the erupt...
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Line 5, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Nevertheless,
... the earth's temperature went down.Nevertheless the speaker says that is true the erupt...
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Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns is enough to created a cooler climate ,yet if the reason is the dusts,it must b...
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Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... climate ,yet if the reason is the dusts,it must be visible since the people would ...
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Line 5, column 399, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'notice'
Suggestion: notice
...sible since the people would definitely noticed the color of the sun changed and deep c...
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Line 5, column 467, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
... changed and deep color 'snow',but there is not any report was founded to ...
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Line 7, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , The
...founded to prove this theory. Thirdly,The population theory,the author believes i...
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Line 7, column 30, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...theory. Thirdly,The population theory,the author believes it may on account of nu...
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Line 7, column 135, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , and
...ion dropped surprisingly before that age,and fields became forests,as the result of ...
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Line 7, column 161, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , as
...efore that age,and fields became forests,as the result of the quantity of trees inc...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...esult of the quantity of trees increased,the were fewer carbon dioxide gas,this kind...
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Line 7, column 244, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , this
...reased,the were fewer carbon dioxide gas,this kind of gas keep the greenhouse effects...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
...e effects happened which warm the earth.However,according to the listening,there is no ...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , according
...ts happened which warm the earth.However,according to the listening,there is no enough tim...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , there
...earth.However,according to the listening,there is no enough times to formed a forest,h...
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Line 7, column 398, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , human&apos
...re is no enough times to formed a forest,human's population growth much faster than tr...
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Line 7, column 452, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , withe
...population growth much faster than trees,withe more people the trees will cut down to ...
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Line 7, column 512, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , so
...he trees will cut down to fields quickly,so it wont disturb the greenhouse effects ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, so, third, thirdly, well, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1373.03311258 114% => OK
No of words: 284.0 270.72406181 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51056338028 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3790545748 2.5805825403 131% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 145.348785872 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62676056338 0.540411800872 116% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.51434878587 330% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 21.2450331126 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 126.986957992 49.2860985944 258% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.25 110.228320801 355% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.0 21.698381199 327% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.25 7.06452816374 301% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 4.19205298013 739% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.272083759551 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.0996497079465 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0662205650399 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.162205337803 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0443174109184 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.3589403974 299% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 53.8541721854 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 5.55761589404 263% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.0289183223 292% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.86 12.2367328918 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.72 8.42419426049 139% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 63.6247240618 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.498013245 290% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 11.2008830022 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 3.33333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 30
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