advantages and disadvantages of paper records and electronic records
The passage states that it was usual in the United States to keep patient's information in form of paper, but they decided to persuade doctors to keep these information in electronic form because of some reasons. On the other hand the lecture mentions that it is not practical really, so the speaker denies all these reasons.
First of all the passage says that storing the data in form of electronic can reduce dramatically the costs while the papers need a lot of space to serve them. although the professor has another significant point of view, she explains that it is unlikely to keep all information in form of electronic, because doctors need to save some of these crucial information by paper as back up.
Second, the passage tells that keeping the data as electronic form can prevent medical errors. The lecture has another opinion, it says that electronic records and electronic data cannot eliminates the errors, because most doctors are not up to date, and they used to write hand notes instead of electronic notes. As a matter of fact, they believe that their poor hand writing is acceptable for them.
Finally, the passage clarifies that electronic records can spectacular aid medical research by making it easy to approach all information. Beside that, the lecture explains that there are tremendous privacy laws for accessing to information. Thus, it would be fundamentally a hardship process, because accessing to these records has striking prestige. Another point is that some patients block their information, so it is impossible to access all data.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 151, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...hey decided to persuade doctors to keep these information in electronic form because of some reas...
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Line 3, column 161, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...pers need a lot of space to serve them. although the professor has another significant p...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, really, second, so, thus, while, as a matter of fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 5.04856512141 139% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 30.3222958057 109% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09652509653 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69887207853 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505791505792 0.540411800872 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.9 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 21.2450331126 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9172071452 49.2860985944 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 110.228320801 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 21.698381199 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06452816374 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182528569288 0.272083759551 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692612533112 0.0996497079465 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710451677531 0.0662205650399 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109911834556 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440054548984 0.0443174109184 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.3589403974 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.498013245 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.