The author talks to us about airships that have a lot of advantages. He or She believes the airship can be used for transportation again. Likewise, the speaker explains that airships likely be used in the future.
According to the author, airships can move vertically like helicopters and some airplanes. They use a ballon rather than an engine to generate a vertical lift. Of course, they just use the engine for horizontal movement therefore they are cost-efficient.
Unlike an airplane, the airship does not require a long runway therefore they can be used in hard-to-reach locations. Helicopters also are vertical take-off and landing, they also don't need a long runway. Airships can carry a very large amount of weight than helicopters, and do many different jobs such as carrying heavy logs from forests to distribution centers, whiles airplanes and helicopters cannot do so.
Airships can also reach a higher altitude than helicopters and airplanes, these advantages allow them to be used to replace satellites. Since airships have a long endurance at high altitude without refueling, they could be equipment important equipment for military purposes.
The speaker believes, that airships use fuel that includes Hydrogen and Helium, they are safe for the environment and cost-efficient as fuel. Airships can be used for carrying a heavy payload. For example, picking up trees in the forest. Airships could be used to replace satellites.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ertical take-off and landing, they also dont need a long runway. Airships can carry ...
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Line 3, column 279, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...ount of weight than helicopters, and do many different jobs such as carrying heavy logs from f...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, so, therefore, while, for example, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 22.412803532 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1218.0 1373.03311258 89% => OK
No of words: 230.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29565217391 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96673427987 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 3.25607064018 246% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4495876467 49.2860985944 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2 110.228320801 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 21.698381199 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06452816374 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.27373068433 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234278256091 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946533855096 0.0996497079465 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521126778625 0.0662205650399 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145163742991 0.162205337803 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0225276202748 0.0443174109184 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.3589403974 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 53.8541721854 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.0289183223 93% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 63.6247240618 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.