Benefits of deforestation.
The article discusses about the benefits of deforestation providing three reasons of support , however the professor claims that there is no need to cut rainforests and rather focus on alterative methods to sustain by refuting all the claims the author makes .
The article claims that clearing of large areas of land results in an abundance of farmland which also benefits the local economy by producing surplus which can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesting alternative methods of farming which does not depend on large areas such as hydroponics and traditional farming . The professor also says that on should not focus on short term increase in economy but rather look at the big picture.
The article posits that the land cleared is used for residential areas apart from farming . However the professor says that deforestation is not the solution to this and it endangers a lot of species by harming the ecosystem . Moreover the professor says that the rainforests provide twenty eight percent of world's oxygen.
The article says that many people's jobs are dependent on the forest industry and it plays an integral part in their life to sustain their livelihood . The article also mentions nations such as Brazil , Thailand etc , however the professor opposes that these nations are developing nations and the forest industry people are being controlled by a larger organization which harvests woods and lumber exploiting these people for very less wage . These people are being involved in a dangerous job with very less returns .
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ation providing three reasons of support , however the professor claims that there...
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...e methods to sustain by refuting all the claims the author makes . The article...
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...efuting all the claims the author makes . The article claims that clearing of ...
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... producing surplus which can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesti...
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...oducing surplus which can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesting a...
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... can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesting alternative methods o...
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...h as hydroponics and traditional farming . The professor also says that on should ...
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...s hydroponics and traditional farming . The professor also says that on should not ...
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... but rather look at the big picture. The article posits that the land cleared is...
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...for residential areas apart from farming . However the professor says that defores...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
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Suggestion: However,
... residential areas apart from farming . However the professor says that deforestation i...
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Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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... lot of species by harming the ecosystem . Moreover the professor says that the ra...
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Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...t of species by harming the ecosystem . Moreover the professor says that the rainforests...
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Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
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Suggestion: twenty-eight
...essor says that the rainforests provide twenty eight percent of worlds oxygen. The artic...
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...n their life to sustain their livelihood . The article also mentions nations such ...
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...cle also mentions nations such as Brazil , Thailand etc , however the professor op...
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...ns nations such as Brazil , Thailand etc , however the professor opposes that thes...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ploiting these people for very less wage . These people are being involved in a da...
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Suggestion: fewer
...g involved in a dangerous job with very less returns .
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...n a dangerous job with very less returns .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.212 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66756381614 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8383372438 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108026158121 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040781045307 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667878156794 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781660502983 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712709533355 0.0443174109184 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ation providing three reasons of support , however the professor claims that there...
^^
Line 1, column 235, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e methods to sustain by refuting all the claims the author makes . The article...
^^
Line 1, column 260, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...efuting all the claims the author makes . The article claims that clearing of ...
^^
Line 3, column 173, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... producing surplus which can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesti...
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Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...oducing surplus which can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesting a...
^^^
Line 3, column 197, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can be exported . The professor refutes this by suggesting alternative methods o...
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Line 3, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...h as hydroponics and traditional farming . The professor also says that on should ...
^^
Line 3, column 332, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s hydroponics and traditional farming . The professor also says that on should not ...
^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... but rather look at the big picture. The article posits that the land cleared is...
^^^
Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...for residential areas apart from farming . However the professor says that defores...
^^
Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... residential areas apart from farming . However the professor says that deforestation i...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... lot of species by harming the ecosystem . Moreover the professor says that the ra...
^^
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...t of species by harming the ecosystem . Moreover the professor says that the rainforests...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 285, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: twenty-eight
...essor says that the rainforests provide twenty eight percent of worlds oxygen. The artic...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n their life to sustain their livelihood . The article also mentions nations such ...
^^
Line 7, column 200, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...cle also mentions nations such as Brazil , Thailand etc , however the professor op...
^^
Line 7, column 215, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ns nations such as Brazil , Thailand etc , however the professor opposes that thes...
^^
Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ploiting these people for very less wage . These people are being involved in a da...
^^
Line 7, column 505, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun returns is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...g involved in a dangerous job with very less returns .
^^^^
Line 7, column 517, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...n a dangerous job with very less returns .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 12.0772626932 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1373.03311258 95% => OK
No of words: 250.0 270.72406181 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.212 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66756381614 2.5805825403 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 145.348785872 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 419.366225166 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 21.2450331126 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8383372438 49.2860985944 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.3 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3 7.06452816374 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108026158121 0.272083759551 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.040781045307 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667878156794 0.0662205650399 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0781660502983 0.162205337803 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0712709533355 0.0443174109184 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.3589403974 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 53.8541721854 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.0289183223 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.42419426049 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.498013245 114% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.