Broccoli
The listening lecture totally opposes to the reading passage in whether it is beneficial to have such biotechnology for growing broccoli. To begin with, the reading says that this new broccoli can be planted in other regions so people no longer need to pay many money for transporting it. However, the listening argues that this is incorrect. This broccoli has a low production rates, so the price is still very high and friendly to people. As a result, the money people save on transporting will counter balance with the high price of broccoli. In other words, this new kind of broccoli will not be beneficial for local people to buy.
In addition, the reading indicates that this new broccoli is made in a fairly traditional form of biotechnology, not by genetically modification, such as corns. Whereas, the listening implies that the new broccoli are producing buy a large company call Monsanto, a company who widely use genetically modification. Therefore, people will not likely to accept it because they know this company sell genetically modification foods.
lastly, while the reading asserts that this new broccoli is fresher and more nutritional value, the listening supports that it is true this kind of broccoli contain some nutrients, but other vegetables also have these nutrients. Moreover, this new broccoli only grow in the summer, but others vegetables grow in anytime in the year. As a result, there are no reason for people to buy this kind of broccoli.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...regions so people no longer need to pay many money for transporting it. However, the...
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Line 1, column 258, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[2]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun money seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much money', 'a good deal of money'.
Suggestion: much money; a good deal of money
...regions so people no longer need to pay many money for transporting it. However, the liste...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lastly
...sell genetically modification foods. lastly, while the reading asserts that this ne...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, still, therefore, whereas, while, in addition, kind of, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 30.3222958057 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1236.0 1373.03311258 90% => OK
No of words: 244.0 270.72406181 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06557377049 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81662053704 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 145.348785872 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52868852459 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 391.5 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9190630159 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3333333333 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06452816374 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358634945819 0.272083759551 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167812447745 0.0996497079465 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0802136531628 0.0662205650399 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270192911871 0.162205337803 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660380887286 0.0443174109184 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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