Buying a franchise company
The author of the reading and the lecturer are both about starting a franchise kind of business. The author believes that a franchise is a positive choice for people that are starting their own business. The lectures disagree with all three of the author's ideas on franchises. I will explain in the following essay how he contradicts each one of the ideas.
First, while the author of the reading believes that buying a franchise will eliminate money problems like choosing a bad supplier. In many cases, a bad supplier can be very costly. as a result, this will be catastrophic for a new owner. The lecturer disputes this idea. He argues that the parent company of the franchise makes the small ower pay high prices for products that can be purchased a lot cheaper by other manufacturers. Consequently, the brand name overcharged the owner of the franchise.
Second, the reading states that the franchise owner will save on advertising because the brand name has already been established in the market. The lecturer debates this idea. She claims that the brand name makes pay the franchise 6% of the cost for advertising. Moreover, the franchise does not benefit from this advertising. The only one that benefits is the parent brand, not the same franchise.
Lastly, according to the author, it is more secure to start a business with a franchised firm than to do it alone. The professor disputes this idea. He believes that there are other choices. A new owner can buy an already existing business. Studies have proven that this type of action can have a much a twice success as buying a franchise
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...er by other manufacturers. Consequently, the brand name overcharged the owner of ...
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Message: You used an adverb ('twice') instead an adjective, or a noun ('success') instead of another adjective.
...hat this type of action can have a much a twice success as buying a franchise
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, lastly, moreover, second, so, while, kind of, as a result, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 30.3222958057 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 5.01324503311 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1373.03311258 97% => OK
No of words: 275.0 270.72406181 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.04702891845 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67295237147 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 145.348785872 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.540411800872 97% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 419.366225166 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 12.0 8.23620309051 146% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 21.2450331126 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6959125789 49.2860985944 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.55 110.228320801 60% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.75 21.698381199 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.65 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259631549102 0.272083759551 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636745598789 0.0996497079465 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690958571263 0.0662205650399 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151345669487 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045852507812 0.0443174109184 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.3589403974 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 53.8541721854 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.0289183223 65% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 63.6247240618 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.498013245 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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