Buying a Franchise. Franchise benefits.
In this set of materials, the reading passage discusses that franchise is a very safe and reliable way to start a business for beginner people. While in the listening the professor casts doubt on what was presented in the text and believes that if you study franchise closely, you can find some points which call it into the question.
First of all, in the text, it is clearly mentioned that through franchise business owners have easier access to supplies and goods they need. however, the professor claims that franchise force business owners to buy some specific types of equipment and goods and tighten business possessor. For example, if there were some cheaper supplies in makers, they would not have this allow to buy and use those stuff.
In addition, the professor disagrees with this idea that the franchise is beneficial for business owners in order to decrease their advertising costs. She says that business owners pay about 60 per cent of their income to the original company. Nonetheless, the franchise company do not advertise only their products, but they advertise the company's brand.
Finally, in the text, it is stated that staring their own business through franchise would be more secure than an independent business. The professor subscribes that someone believes that starting a business by the franchise is less risky. however, they do not account some already existed previous companies. The survey shows that independent companies have twice more chance of success than franchising business.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...access to supplies and goods they need. however, the professor claims that franchise fo...
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Line 4, column 383, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'buying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: buying
... makers, they would not have this allow to buy and use those stuff. In addition,...
^^^^^^
Line 10, column 241, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...usiness by the franchise is less risky. however, they do not account some already exist...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nonetheless, so, while, for example, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 30.3222958057 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1288.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 246.0 270.72406181 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23577235772 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.04702891845 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57054606119 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569105691057 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.0 419.366225166 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8931851529 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.333333333 110.228320801 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06452816374 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1635091984 0.272083759551 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648562449697 0.0996497079465 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358839078871 0.0662205650399 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101087029981 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276059874904 0.0443174109184 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.3589403974 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.42419426049 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 63.6247240618 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 10.7273730684 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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