comics
The reading discusses comics and where they were first formed. Comics, as the author mentions, were originally created in America. However the lecturer challenges the claims made by the author.
First of all, the author of the reading claims that the first successful comic strip was Hogan’s Alley that was created in the 1890s.the world’s first distinguished comic character the Yellow kid was featured by Hogan Alley. conversely, the lecturer rebuts it by saying that the Alley comics weren’t that successful and the Yllow Kid wasn’t the world’s first character. In the 1790s there were much more successful and popular comic strips and characters especialy in Britian and in Swiserand.
Secondly, the author asserts that the most popular superhero superman was also created in America. In contrast, the lecturer argues by saying that superhero wasn’t created in America. Quiet the contrary, supermen’s author was Canadian.
Finally, the author states that manga (Japanese comics) was created after World War II when American comics were first brought to Japan. He also says that some Europian comics are inspired by American Disney comic books. On the other hand, the lectuerer claims that in Japanese comics had a grate influence not American comics but asian culture. And what concerns to Europian comics, they were influenced by astecs.
To wrap up, though the reading and the listening are about the origin of comics, the lecturer opposes to the author by bringing explanations.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 132, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...ns, were originally created in America. However the lecturer challenges the claims made...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Conversely
...Yellow kid was featured by Hogan Alley. conversely, the lecturer rebuts it by saying that ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, however, second, secondly, so, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.4613686534 124% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 7.30242825607 110% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1293.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 237.0 270.72406181 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45569620253 5.08290768461 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70840723361 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502109704641 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 388.8 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.7630738593 49.2860985944 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.3571428571 110.228320801 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9285714286 21.698381199 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 7.06452816374 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 4.33554083885 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351333806748 0.272083759551 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14114695526 0.0996497079465 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.156675101646 0.0662205650399 237% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177417021426 0.162205337803 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.181993759816 0.0443174109184 411% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.3589403974 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.8541721854 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.0289183223 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.2367328918 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.7273730684 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 71.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.5 Out of 30
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