Concern about the phenomenon known as global warming has been growing in recent years. Earths temperature is rising, largely as a result of human activity. Since the Industrial Revolution, humans have added significantly to the greenhouse gases in the Earths atmosphere through increases in activities such as cutting down forests and burning fossil fuels like coal and oil. Greenhouse gases hold heat in the atmosphere, and to a certain extent, their presence is natural. An artificial increase in the amount of these gases, however, leads to a rise in temperatures on Earth.
The author of the passage emphasizes on the precarious nature of the global warming that has been increasing at an alarming pace in recent years. It provides certain examples and evidences that further accentuates its precariousness. The lecture is in concert with the passage and specifically emphasizes on the economic impacts of the Global Warming.
The passage provides various causes that leads to increase in the average earth temperature such as increase in the concentration of greenhouse gases. The most influential greenhouse gas, carbon dioxide has been continuously increasing due to increased emission from vehicles. The passage provides evidence such as increase in the average earth temperature by 1.5 degree Fahrenheit to suggest its dangerous impacts. It also discusses about the various weather changes that have resulted due to Global Warming. These weather changes trigger disastrous events such as floods, droughts and hurricanes endangering numerous plants and animal species. The author finally provides the economic impacts of the global warming by citing a report depicting a decrease in GDP and Per-capita consumption.
The lecture serves as an assistance to the passage by further highlighting the economic impacts of global warming particularly in the North Eastern United States. It says that the areas which used to be predominantly cold and snowy, are not as cold as before. This significantly affects the economy sector of these regions which primarily depend upon Ski industry and tourism. With less extreme winters, the amount of snow is reduced and so is the Ski business. The lecture not only describes the direct effects but also explains the indirect effects such as reduction of business in Local Hotels, Ski equipment as well as Gift shops. Along with ski industry, the speaker provides other examples such as less colorful Fall Foliage, consequently attracting a less number of tourists. The speaker also cites reports showing increase in average temperatures and decrease in average snowfall.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 152, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... the concentration of greenhouse gases. The most influential greenhouse gas, carbon...
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Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ue to increased emission from vehicles. The passage provides evidence such as incre...
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Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... business in Local Hotels, Ski equipment as well as Gift shops. Along with ski in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 30.3222958057 129% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1373.03311258 126% => OK
No of words: 315.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48571428571 5.08290768461 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87412238623 2.5805825403 111% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 145.348785872 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6525678875 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.0 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6875 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06452816374 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.09492273731 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124259340762 0.272083759551 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041121327704 0.0996497079465 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429952521662 0.0662205650399 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0871392308459 0.162205337803 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322996712289 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.8541721854 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 63.6247240618 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted. The correct pattern:
para 1: introduction
para 2: doubt 1
para 3: doubt 2
para 4: doubt 3
Less contents wanted from the reading passages(25%), more content wanted from the lecture (75%).
Don't need a conclusion paragraph.
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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