The article state that, dams are massive concrete walls places inside rivers and hold backwater, this leads to generate the electricity. In addition, article provides three benefactors from the generation of dams. However, the professor state that dams has also some disadvantages that are not specifying by the article. Although, professor refute each point made by the article and provide three counter reasons for them.
First, reading state that dam forming the artificial lakes and these lakes are wonderful habitat for the fish. The professor refute the article point by saying that, during the construction of dams the natural path of the rivers are diverted to another path that is leads to migration of the fish and these migration leads to massive destruction in fish population.
Second, the article state that the power generated from the dam produces no harmful pollutants like other dominant sources to generate the electricity. On the other side, the professor state that during the construction of the dams, the changing of the natural river path is very essential and that leads to the flood at other places and this result reaction in methanol and carbon gases that affects the global warming. In addition, plans also lose their vegetation capacity in the flooded areas.
Third, the reading states that, the generation of the dams leads to the good revenues. In contras of this, professor state that the artificial lakes also lead to the flooded regions to the private properties. In addition, these regions made clear by the amount of the peoples taxes. Therefore, the professor contrast each point that made by the passage.
that dams has also some disadvantages that are not specifying by the article.
that dams have also some disadvantages that are not specifying by the article.
Sentence: Although, professor refute each point made by the article and provide three counter reasons for them.
Description: The fragment professor refute each is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace refute with verb, past tense
reading state that dam forming the artificial lakes and these lakes are wonderful habitat for the fish.
reading states that dams are forming the artificial lakes and these lakes are wonderful habitat for the fish.
Sentence: The professor refute the article point by saying that, during the construction of dams the natural path of the rivers are diverted to another path that is leads to migration of the fish and these migration leads to massive destruction in fish population.
Description: The fragment professor refute the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace refute with verb, past tense
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to is and leads
Sentence: In addition, these regions made clear by the amount of the peoples taxes.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to peoples and taxes
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
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Score: 21 in 30
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 6 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 13 12
No. of Words: 267 250
No. of Characters: 1345 1200
No. of Different Words: 120 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.042 4.2
Average Word Length: 5.037 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.458 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 93 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 77 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 46 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.538 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.071 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.392 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.591 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.098 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4