dinosaurs endotherm

Essay topics

The professor in the lecture refutes that the passage. Dinosaurs are referred as endotherms which is animals keep their body temperatures constant. However, the lecturer gave three against reasons.

First, about discovery of the fossils in polar region is not support the idea because when dinosaurs are alive, polar area was warmer than today. Also, when it was getting cold in severe winter season, they might migrate to warmer area.

Second, leg position and movement is considered as reason. The reading material have shown that all modern endotherms have legs underneath the body to sustain their physical activity such as running. In contrast, the professor said that the position of legs are for support their weight. The legs are needed to sustain their large body.

Third, about bone structure. Haversian canals is the structure which endotherms usually have. The professor mentioned about growth rings which is in their bone structure. This ring showed that dinosaurs stop growing or slowly in cold time so they are not endotherms.

Votes
Average: 8 (1 vote)
Essay Categories

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, second, so, third, in contrast, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 22.412803532 58% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 30.3222958057 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 886.0 1373.03311258 65% => OK
No of words: 167.0 270.72406181 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30538922156 5.08290768461 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 4.04702891845 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41601740289 2.5805825403 94% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 145.348785872 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622754491018 0.540411800872 115% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 419.366225166 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 21.2450331126 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3385005857 49.2860985944 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1538461538 110.228320801 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8461538462 21.698381199 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06452816374 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.27373068433 187% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208252561196 0.272083759551 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621364417326 0.0996497079465 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0964787886376 0.0662205650399 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123510065683 0.162205337803 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685934988645 0.0443174109184 155% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.3589403974 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 53.8541721854 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.63 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 63.6247240618 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.7273730684 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.498013245 65% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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