Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
With the development of technology, it is more and more convenient for us to contact with others by telephone or telecommunication equipments. Therefore, there is also more possibility for us to acquaint new people and establish relationship with them. However, how to maintain a good friendship is always under heated discussion. As far as i am concerned, i disagree with the statement that telling the truth is the most important consideration when it comes to relationship. personally, i believe there are many other factors which will contribute to valuable relationship.
To begin with, although telling the truth does play an important role in friendship between people, it sometimes hurts others and may even separates close friends apart. taking myself for example, i used to believe honesty and trust are the key factors concerning relationship. when i was in primary school, i made a huge mistake and ruined relationship with my best friend. mary, a lovely girl with blonde hair and beautiful face, was my most close friend at that time. Despite she had a comely appearance and she was always willing to offer help whenever i was in trouble, my mother did not like her because her grades was not as good as me. my mother told me to stay away from her and it bothered me a lot. One day, i could not stand it any longer and shared my experience with her. she was heart broken about the truth that her best friend's mother hated her and chose to stay away from me since then. this experience gives me a life-long lesson. if i could be back to that year, i would had holden the truth and never told it to mary.
Secondly, i believe there are many other characteristics that a man will expect of his/her friend, shared interest and common experience, for example. only when people have linked interest, can they begin a topic, have further communications and eventually become good friends. Otherwise, they will never have chance to know each other and discover the charming sides of his/her counterparts. I used to ask my mother why she chooses cici, her friend since a very young age, as her best friend. my mother said that they came across each other at the age of seven on a chorus and found out that both of them had passion for singing. my mother grew interested in Aunt cici at the time when she heard they shared the same interest and tried to find out more about her. Later, she realized that cici is not only an optimistic person but also ambitious about life, just the same as her. it is due to their commonalities that my mother cherishes this relationship for all these years.
Lastly, besides holding the same interest and common topic, being a considerate person is also essential in relationship. who would like a friend who only takes care of himself and never pays attention to his/her friend's command? this is true not only between friends, but also for husbands and wife. yang Jiang and qian Zhongshu, a household couple in China, is an example for point. they are both established people in Chinese literacy and have tons of business to deal with everyday. being considerate partners, they both sit in other's shoes and try their best to satisfy other's demand. yang will do chores in house if she had time and so did qian. they set a good example for us to maintain a good relationship.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for example, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.4613686534 210% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 7.30242825607 356% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 85.0 22.412803532 379% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 30.3222958057 224% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 5.01324503311 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2749.0 1373.03311258 200% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 581.0 270.72406181 215% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73149741824 5.08290768461 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.90957651803 4.04702891845 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6742468667 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 145.348785872 195% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488812392427 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 856.8 419.366225166 204% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 24.0 3.25607064018 737% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.25165562914 399% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 13.0662251656 237% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 18.0 21.2450331126 85% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8178496057 49.2860985944 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6774193548 110.228320801 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7419354839 21.698381199 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58064516129 7.06452816374 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 4.19205298013 835% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 23.0 4.33554083885 530% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148139593658 0.272083759551 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441973008317 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0637357135002 0.0662205650399 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112633483393 0.162205337803 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0816268643855 0.0443174109184 184% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.3589403974 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 8.42419426049 86% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 63.6247240618 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 10.7273730684 84% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.498013245 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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