Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.
It is highly debated whether it is important to know about events happening around the world. Nowadays, technology enables us to acquire news from all around the world. Some people value the news and believe that knowing what happen to others is important while the others hold an opposite opinion. Since the world is connected through environment and trading, I believe that knowing the events around the world is critical. That is, what seems to unlikely affect your daily life may cast a huge influence indirectly without you even notice.
To begin with, global environmental effect such as global warming will directly affect all residents on earth even at the place having no pollution and excessive carbon dioxide; hence it is important to know the events that might lead to a more serious condition. A famous phenomenon called butterfly phenomenon best illustrates this kind of event - a butterfly flaps its wings somewhere may cause a dramatic storm elsewhere. For example, when developing countries like China and India busy operating factories and emitting greenhouse gases, it may not harm the daily life in the United States. However, when the gases increase, the global warming effect deteriorates. All residents including American will be suffering from the extreme whether. If people from other places know what is going on in developing countries, they can put some stress on those together to lower the emission level.
In addition, many countries are connected by trading so that a crisis happening at one place may cause economic changes in global market. Since the world has become highly specialized, most countries rely on trading with another. For example, even if you are living in the United States, the coffee beans you buy may be produced from Mexico. So if one day Mexico does not have good harvest on coffee, the supply of coffee beans will decrease. Consequently, the price of Mexican coffee beans distributed in American supermarket will inevitably be higher than before. It might not directly make a huge impact on your daily life when you see poor harvest news from TV but if you know that is happening, perhaps you can stock more coffee beans before the price goes up which would save a bunch of money.
To sum up, the earth is described as a global village where environment and economy link the countries together. Therefore, events such as poor harvest and greenhouse gas emission happen at one corner on the earth may seem to bring no harm to your daily life but will in fact have huge impact on the whole world. Accordingly, knowing what is happening around the world is important to understand the circumstances and perhaps take action if necessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s and perhaps take action if necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, consequently, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, you know, on the whole, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 5.04856512141 317% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 30.3222958057 195% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2252.0 1373.03311258 164% => OK
No of words: 449.0 270.72406181 166% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01559020045 5.08290768461 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.60321845022 4.04702891845 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58225760159 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 145.348785872 160% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516703786192 0.540411800872 96% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 419.366225166 169% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.25165562914 479% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8350027591 49.2860985944 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.6 110.228320801 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.45 21.698381199 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06452816374 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334656043205 0.272083759551 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952101341429 0.0996497079465 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823780315966 0.0662205650399 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212341779127 0.162205337803 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880082445212 0.0443174109184 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.3589403974 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.42419426049 97% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 63.6247240618 154% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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