Do you agree or disagree? Playing computer games is a waste of time.children should not be allowed to play them.
One of the major problem facing by the parents now is, kids want to play more video games. Some folks says these will increase their brain function. However, these playing will affect their studies and their health. There are several reason why I believe kids playing computer games are purely waste of time and these will be the focus of my essay.
First reason is, most of the kids playing get addicted and they don't have time to do the home work. My son who is 10 years old will start playing these games just after coming from the school. He don't care of food and we try to restrict him and it is very hard for him to give up. The main problem is, he is not interested in studying and doing assignments. I believe there are a lot of cases similarly like this. It started as a fun now it is very hard to avoid. Therefor, playing digital games will give initial fun but this will affect their studies.
Second reason is, if the kids get playing often they don't want to play outside. My son has no interest in playing outside. This may affect his health. One of the study conducted in London showed that the kids playing more than two hours in a day have a high chance of becoming obese. Moreover, this will also affect their whole body. In that age kids has to do more physical activities but these games will make them more lazy. As a result playing more video game
can make the kids sick.
Third reason is, there is high chance to imitate this games. Most of the games are killing with guns. So in this little age they are pretending to shoot. This is giving a wrong message to their brain. There is a study conducted in UK says that one-third of the criminals are addicted to video games in their life time. This is not a simple issue and this virus is coming in new advanced forms. To sum up, these type of games are not good for the kids brain.
In conclusion, computer games are actually waste of time and this can cause more socio economic problems in the
world. Parents should control the usage of these in their kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, similarly, so, third, as to, in conclusion, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 10.4613686534 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 5.04856512141 238% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 12.0772626932 33% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 30.3222958057 152% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1373.03311258 121% => OK
No of words: 382.0 270.72406181 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.36387434555 5.08290768461 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00547652101 2.5805825403 78% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 145.348785872 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473821989529 0.540411800872 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 419.366225166 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.55342163355 84% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 3.25607064018 369% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 13.0662251656 207% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.010628984 49.2860985944 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.7407407407 110.228320801 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1481481481 21.698381199 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.81481481481 7.06452816374 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.09492273731 171% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 4.19205298013 286% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 4.45695364238 269% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234179802891 0.272083759551 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655145834459 0.0996497079465 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662748272633 0.0662205650399 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113045826206 0.162205337803 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.072298017565 0.0443174109184 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.2 13.3589403974 46% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 53.8541721854 153% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 11.0289183223 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 12.2367328918 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.42419426049 78% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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