It is better to have a broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
In this competitive world every one wants to settle early and earn more money. Some folks believe that taking multiple subjects will give broad knowledge but some folks think that taking one subject is will give in depth knowledge. I prefer to take single subjects because it offers many advantages over multiple subjects.
First of all, single subject makes good professionals. For example, I want to become a nurse, so I take biology as a subject and this offers me to study more focus only in one subject. If I took social science also these become contradictory and I can't concentrate on both subjects. Taking biology as a single subject helped me to earn good scholarship and I become nurse in two years. Some people say that,if, we take two subjects the chances of getting a job is high. However, if we are good in our profession and if we have good knowledge and the skill then we will get the job easily. Therefor, taking single subjects give more focus compared to taking multiple subjects.
In addition, studying single subject saves lot of time and money. The same my own example clarifies this, usually the nursing programme is for three years since I have lot of time and doing only one subject I took some additional courses. These helped me to finish the course in two years and by doing this I saved lot of time and started earning one year before. Some people say if we take two subjects we can change the field easily. Nevertheless, we have to select the course which we are interested so we will enjoy the work. As a result, taking
single subject will help to finish the course early and this will benefit financially as compared to multiple subjects.
In conclusion, taking single subjects makes good committed professionals and will help to save time and start earn early. We should first decide which subject we like and which profession we needs. This is not a simple process which needs good research and help from
parents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1977.66487455 82% => OK
No of words: 342.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73976608187 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47414903075 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 212.727598566 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.456140350877 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 505.8 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9907501167 48.9658058833 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3157894737 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.5376344086 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221624935489 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830452611658 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525561039382 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139571574832 0.150856017488 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0591934808671 0.0645574589148 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 10.9000537634 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 86.8835125448 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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