Do you agree or disagree: Students are more interested in politics now than they were in the past.
In such a civilized society, in spite of different disagreements, people have in various areas so far as one’s view goes, one point that virtually everybody approves upon is the importance of the politics. This is mostly owing to the fact that it plays an important role in each country. With this in mind, a broad range of controversial attitudes might stimulate heated debate as students have encouraged more than a few decades ago to continue their higher education in politics. I personally concur with this claim. Among the many reasons one can give for this point, two conspicuous reasons will be elaborated through ensuing lines.
The first and prominent reason which comes to the mind is that a vast majority of our news in mass media is related to politics and interaction of various countries with together. It goes without saying that peace is the most significant issue throughout the sophisticated world due to a huge number of conflicts and wars in several regions of the world such as in Yemen, Afghanistan, etc. As a result, students encounter with these events and thus become more interested to know more about the politics by organizing of groups in the social networks such as Facebook to argue with together.
Another equally important reason which deserves some words here is that nowadays, the politician's lives is more convenient compared to other careers. Needless to say that, the salary of all politicians is higher than other jobs due to the sensitivity and difficulty of responsibility. Therefore, most of the students have been encouraged to politics. According to a recent but reputable research conducted at the Sharif University of Technology, among the huge number of randomly selected students of various high schools in my country, it was found that the number of students who want continue their studies in politics at the university is thriving with a rate of 13 percent annually.
Last but not the least reason is that there are a great number of available books and articles related to the politics compared to several years ago which students can read and study through the Internet or in the libraries. Take myself as an example, as I am a senior student of politics, I have read lots of articles, written by various authors, related to the Middle-East interaction with the United States. In articles, I found the justification of interactions from different angles and thus gave me a great opportunity to realize a good perspective on this issue.
In conclusion, there are numerous reasons which can be persuasive enough to substantiate my view. Based on the given reasons above, which are the mass media and the salary gained by politicians, I highly recommend that authorities should provide a high atmosphere for students to investigate politics.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 22.412803532 134% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 78.0 30.3222958057 257% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2353.0 1373.03311258 171% => OK
No of words: 463.0 270.72406181 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08207343413 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63868890866 4.04702891845 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89165294761 2.5805825403 112% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 145.348785872 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529157667387 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 743.4 419.366225166 177% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 8.23620309051 49% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 2.5761589404 311% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 13.0662251656 130% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.725462626 49.2860985944 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.411764706 110.228320801 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2352941176 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 4.19205298013 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116604136262 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035657673281 0.0996497079465 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415240447563 0.0662205650399 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644998833161 0.162205337803 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032146165445 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.3589403974 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 53.8541721854 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.0289183223 125% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.42419426049 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 63.6247240618 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 83.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.