Parents are more involved in their children's education than they were in the past.
In recent ages, societies become more developed and the level of their educated people has improved. As a result, children's education has been a debatable notion in most of families. Some people believe that children or teenagers are more intelligent than before and they exposure to a wide range of the information so they can be more independent in their studies and the role of parents in their education become less important. On the other hand some people claim that parents have more essential role than before in their kid's education and this is my opinion, too. Because of some reasons I will mention below.
Firstly, statistics show that the age of being autonomous financially is raised these days. In conclusion teenagers and kids have been supported from the first years of elementary school to the end of their education in the university by their parents. For example, when I enrolled college I had a part time job to manage my expenses and afford them because I was mature enough to be independent but after five years when I was in university, my cousin attended college and she did not work.
Secondly, parents are more educated these days so they can help their kids in their school materials more than before scientifically. Furthermore, although attaining information is not a concern these days because of the growing technology, at first steps of using these facilities in a right way, parents can be one of the most important teachers for their kids.
To recap, in my opinion parents are more involved in their children's education than before because they provide whatever their children desire to study and economically have their youngsters to study in the college and university. Besides, they try to help their kids in their material courses and trait them very well to use the technology as a source of information and education.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 166, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...ducation has been a debatable notion in most of families. Some people believe that children or t...
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Line 1, column 571, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... education and this is my opinion, too. Because of some reasons I will mention below. ...
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Line 3, column 299, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...xample, when I enrolled college I had a part time job to manage my expenses and afford th...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a right way" with adverb for "right"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t first steps of using these facilities in a right way, parents can be one of the most importa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.4613686534 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 5.04856512141 79% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 22.412803532 174% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 30.3222958057 148% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.01324503311 199% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1556.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 313.0 270.72406181 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97124600639 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71859641487 2.5805825403 105% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504792332268 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 504.9 419.366225166 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.7906507205 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.666666667 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 21.698381199 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3333333333 7.06452816374 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 4.33554083885 208% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 4.45695364238 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.392274565418 0.272083759551 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.157657709862 0.0996497079465 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137823734828 0.0662205650399 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257110323813 0.162205337803 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127574118163 0.0443174109184 288% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 53.8541721854 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.0289183223 121% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 63.6247240618 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 10.7273730684 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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