Pets should be treated like family members
Pets are important because they provide us with companionship and even with love. Many people have close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, dogs and cats as members of their family. Some people believe that it is not good to have too close relationship with a pet, or treat it like a human being. Because devoting too much time to pets can prevent you from focusing on relationship with others. In my opinion, pets give us a lot and they deserve our care and attention but it is never a good idea to go to extremes.
First, loving a pet too much can interfere with good relationships with people. For example, a person who lives alone might dedicate all his attention to his pet. He might lose interest in making friends and being with people. In fact, a relationship with pet is less complicated than a relationship with a person. Sometimes it is easier to choose pets over people.
Second, being supportive is one of the most important aspects of family relationships. As a matter of fact, our dogs, cats and other animals can support us emotionally and sometimes practically but they can't help us in every circumstances that we might have a problem. For example, if I have a financial problem, my parents and my sisters can help me and they will but my cat can't. So with a strong family relationship we can always feel safe.
At last but not least, researchers has shown that having a pet can be one of the longevity factors, reduce the risk of depression. Lots of dogs with training can help elderlies and children as a nurse, or they can help detectives and police services. Pets bring us lots of benefits and they deserve our love, attention and care but we should not substitute our relationships with human beings for our pets.
In conclusion, it is important to balance our pets' needs with our own. Having a pet is really enjoyable and beneficial. However, we should take care not to go to extremes.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...hould take care not to go to extremes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, second, so, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as a matter of fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6511627907 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7201598989 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497093023256 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0604919423 48.9658058833 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.1904761905 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.380952381 20.6045352989 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52380952381 5.45110844103 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216944831093 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069478549819 0.076458572812 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0479736203522 0.0737576698707 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118229552744 0.150856017488 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309818258369 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 58.1214874552 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 10.9000537634 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 86.8835125448 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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