The lecturer disputes the author's suggested claims that edmontosaurs migrated to the south every winter to run away of the harsh weather conditions. She provides several reasons to cast doubt about the author's claims.
First, according to the text edmontosaurs needed to migrate to the south to find food in winter because othewise, they would be starving. The speaker finds this idea debatable. He contends that indeed there was no need for these animals to migrate to the south because dead plants were readily available in the winter season. She states that these animals might feed on them for the whole season is enough to feed the animals the whole season. The plenty of sun in summer would allow such plant to be abundantly available even in the winter season.
The lecturer contradicts the fallacy of the passage since these animals lived in herds, they should migrate.The lecturer contends that not all animals living in herds should necessarily migrate. She gives an example of the Rosivult alc, which practically they live in herds,but they still don't migrate.This behavior may serve other reasons like providing protection against predators.
Finally, the author argues that edmontosaurs were physically fit to migrate long distances at a high spead which prove the migration theory. The lecturer refutes this claim by stating that ultimately, they were capable of doing so. However, what about the juvenile group[ of the herd? She contends that theoretically speaking this group ogf the herd were not able to travel long distances. Accordingly, the adults would not have other choice, but to stay with them because they cannot leave them alone.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 307, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...e dead plants were readily available in the winter season. She states that these animals might fe...
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Line 2, column 530, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'winter'.
Suggestion: winter
...lant to be abundantly available even in the winter season. The lecturer contradicts the fallacy ...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...als lived in herds, they should migrate.The lecturer contends that not all animals...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...als lived in herds, they should migrate.The lecturer contends that not all animals...
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Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hould migrate.The lecturer contends that not all animals living in herds should n...
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Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , but
...lc, which practically they live in herds,but they still dont migrate.This behavior m...
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Line 3, column 290, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...cally they live in herds,but they still dont migrate.This behavior may serve other r...
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Line 3, column 303, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ve in herds,but they still dont migrate.This behavior may serve other reasons like p...
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Line 4, column 271, Rule ID: EN_UNPAIRED_BRACKETS
Message: Unpaired symbol: ']' seems to be missing
.... However, what about the juvenile group[ of the herd? She contends that theoreti...
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Line 4, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space after the opening parenthesis
Suggestion: [
.... However, what about the juvenile group[ of the herd? She contends that theoretic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, first, however, may, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 30.3222958057 119% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1373.03311258 102% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20446096654 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51297815689 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591078066914 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 419.366225166 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.782695273 49.2860985944 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.0 110.228320801 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2142857143 21.698381199 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07142857143 7.06452816374 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194958391914 0.272083759551 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711150373778 0.0996497079465 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124181926092 0.0662205650399 188% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127715676445 0.162205337803 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0768060105285 0.0443174109184 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.3589403974 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.2367328918 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.