elephant's behaviors
BOTH THE READING AND THE LACTURE ARE TALKING ABOUT ELEPHANT'S behavior. The rading states that elephants have surprising behaviors. However, the proffesor opposes this. She said that elepgants are fascinating, but the believes about their behavior is based on miss understanding.
According to the passage, elephants can feel the death, as they become older. This particular example is challenged by the proffesor. She states that this believe is not true. She said that elephants leave the herd when they are older, because of their teeth, they are not able to chew hard food. Therefore, they move to another envoirnment where thy can find soft food to eat. They are looking for soft veggetables, and those are found usually near water.
Moreover, the author of the reading supports the idea that the elephants are able to perform artistic ability. The author says that they are capable to paint on canvas after they are being tought by humans. On the other hand, the lecturer says that they are not able to paint, but they are able to keep the bruth on they ears and move over and over, and this they do repeat the pattern of the pictures.
Finally, the reading part hold the opinion that elephans are afraid of mice. It says that the elephants run away as soon as they see mice. Yet, the professor in the listening part does not agree with the author's idea. She says that this is a miss understanding that elephants are afraid of mice. Moreover, she claims that they are not scared from mice but they are scared from something that is unknown for them. She agave the example of the elephans that live in zoo who are not scared of mice, because they are already familiar with them.
In summary, bot the reading and the listening part are holding different ideas regarding elephant's behaviors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 218, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'beliefs' (noun) instead of believes (verb)?
Suggestion: beliefs
...that elepgants are fascinating, but the believes about their behavior is based on miss u...
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Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nderstanding. According to the passage, elephants can feel the death, as they be...
^^
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
... by the proffesor. She states that this believe is not true. She said that elephants le...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 404, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... do repeat the pattern of the pictures. Finally, the reading part hold the opini...
^^^
Line 4, column 205, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... listening part does not agree with the authors idea. She says that this is a miss unde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in summary, talking about, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 10.4613686534 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 22.412803532 205% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 30.3222958057 115% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1373.03311258 108% => OK
No of words: 311.0 270.72406181 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78135048232 5.08290768461 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.04702891845 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34995221456 2.5805825403 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 145.348785872 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488745980707 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 3.25607064018 338% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 1.51434878587 264% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1816358346 49.2860985944 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.35 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 21.698381199 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.65 7.06452816374 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 4.19205298013 119% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20247572972 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757791201878 0.0996497079465 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102419120124 0.0662205650399 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140292279304 0.162205337803 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116482954568 0.0443174109184 263% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 53.8541721854 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.0289183223 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.2367328918 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.7273730684 47% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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