employee vs business owner
The reading passage argues that working for a company has many negative aspects and it's better to have your own business. However, the speaker in the lecture casts doubt on the claims made in the article. He mentions that starting a business is a road filled with trouble since most businesses ultimately fail and it's preferrable to be an employee.
First and foremost, the author contends that employees have to deal with multiple levels of bureaucracy in a corporation and it's hard to get in contact with the upper echelon, meaning their ideas are never listened to or acted upon. In addition, senior management always take credit for the hard work done by their staff. The lecturer, on the other hand, indicates that establishing a new business is also a bureaucratic nightmare since the owner has to satisfy the requirements of state and federal laws by obtaining the necessary permits and licenses. Moreover, even if one had a great idea, this idea might have already been patented by someone else.
Secondly, the writer holds that job security is a thing of the past as most corporations that were once believed secure crumbled under the weight of financial miscalculations, leading many people to lose their employment. According to the excerpt, operating a business offers greater degree of financial security. Nevertheless, the lecturer refutes this argument by declaring that employers have to pay taxes, rent and employee wages, which put them under financial pressure. What's more, the lecturer further elaborates that new businesses that do not become profitable after six months are unlikely to succeed leaving the owners with all the accrued debt that they would have to repay.
Lastly, the article asserts that when corporations go bankrupt, workers lose their pension plans and benefits. Nonetheless, the listening maintains that running a business is even riskier since the employer has to provide insurance for the property, inventory and the employees as well. Furthermore, in case the pension plans fall apart, workers could sue the firm for their lost compensation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, if, lastly, moreover, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, well, as to, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 30.3222958057 135% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1765.0 1373.03311258 129% => OK
No of words: 337.0 270.72406181 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23738872404 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.04702891845 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75863546872 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632047477745 0.540411800872 117% => OK
syllable_count: 544.5 419.366225166 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 13.0662251656 107% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.500140423 49.2860985944 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.071428571 110.228320801 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0714285714 21.698381199 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06452816374 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180282336391 0.272083759551 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524610040598 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577761557201 0.0662205650399 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10016721406 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0216222702404 0.0443174109184 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.3589403974 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.42419426049 113% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 63.6247240618 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.7273730684 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 26.5 Out of 30
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