Genetic modification, a process used to change an organism’s genes and hence its characteristics, is now being used to improve trees. Through genetic modification, it is possible to create trees that produce more fruits, grow faster, or withstand adverse conditions. Planting genetically modified trees on a large scale promises to bring a number of benefits.
Firstly, genetically modified trees are designed to be hardier than nature trees; that is, they are more likely to survive than their unmodified counterparts. In Hawaii, for example, a new pest-resistant species of papaya trees has been developed in response to ringspot virus infections that have repeatedly damaged the native papaya tree population. Planting the genetically modified papayas has largely put an end to the ringspot problem.
Moreover, genetically modified trees promise to bring a number of economic benefits to those who grow them. Genetically modified trees tend to grow faster, give greater yields of food, fruit, or other products and be hardier. This allows tree farmers to get faster and greater returns on their farming investment and save on pesticides as well.
Finally, the use of genetically modified trees can prevent overexploitation of wild trees. Because of the growing demand for firewood or building timber, many forests around the world are being cut down faster than they can be replaced. Introducing genetically modified trees, designed for fast growth and high yield in given geographic conditions, would satisfy the demand for wood in many of those areas and save the endangered native trees,
The reading states that genetically modified trees have some benefits and the reading provides three reasons of support. The lecturer challenges the claims made by the author. He explains this process have some loses and has some extra cost and refutes each of the author's claims.
First of all, the author argues that genetically modified trees are more likely to survive than their unmodified trees in given area. Moreover, the author give an example of papaya trees in Hawaii after genetically modified they can resistance ring spot virus infectionand prevent the loses. This specific argument is challenged by the lecturer. He says that it would not provide total benefits of trees dagage. The lecturer elaborates on this point by bringing up the point that in natural growing , though, some part are have been damaging after other part capable to resistance from climate change or virus infection etc but the genetical modified trees can not that because these are specific types of modification thus it would highly possible in specific area specific genetic modification trees damage by other attack . As a result that actually bring more loses.
Secondly, the article states that genetic modifiation trees have an economic benefits because by these planting farmers to get faster and greater returns on their investment. The lecturer, however,
rebuts this claim that this planting have some hidden charges and that actually ocuurs more expense rather than profit. Additionally, the lecturer says that modified seeds prize are two times greater than natural seeds besides it is not free to seeds buying one time and planting after enormous time without charge. farmer given charge every time they can plant modified trees and that's why this modified tree actually brings economic burden.
Finally, the author posits that overexploitation is prevented by the planting of genetically modified trees. In the article it is says that modified trees grow faster and high yield in given geographic conditions. thus they can satify and save native trees. In contrast, the lecturer's position is that genetically modified trees actually threaten native trees because of their aggressive growth. Furthermore, the lecturer says that modified trees also compete with the native tree
as a result lack of sunlight , water and lack of nutrition native trees have damaged.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, thus, in contrast, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 22.412803532 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 30.3222958057 122% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.01324503311 219% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 1373.03311258 147% => OK
No of words: 374.0 270.72406181 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38235294118 5.08290768461 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.04702891845 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50967633944 2.5805825403 97% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 145.348785872 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 623.7 419.366225166 149% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.23620309051 134% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 13.0662251656 138% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.5233973556 49.2860985944 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 110.228320801 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7777777778 21.698381199 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06452816374 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.09492273731 147% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 4.45695364238 224% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144980206842 0.272083759551 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542156679129 0.0996497079465 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379621182959 0.0662205650399 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790199055668 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0468738228546 0.0443174109184 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.2367328918 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.42419426049 100% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 63.6247240618 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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