he passage indicates that the recent discovery of a 70-million-year-old fossil of dinosaur showed that the actual tissues of the animal may remain while in the past it assumed impossible.
In this set of material, the passage indicates that the recent discovery of a 70-million-year-old fossil of dinosaur showed that the actual tissues of the animal may remain while in the past it assumed impossible. The passage three pieces of evidence to support. The lecturer casts doubt on the main points and rejects each of the author's proofs.
The author claims that in the breaking fossilized leg bone revealed many small channels that are similar to the hollows in the bones where blood vessels were once located. the presence of a soft, flexible organic substance inside the channels may represent the remains of the actual blood vessels. The professor opposes this point. He said it is not necessary that soft substances be the remains of blood vessels. It could be the colonized bacteria that left their traces in empty hollows.
As a second reason, the presence of reddish spheres contained iron - a material vital to the role of red blood cells in transporting oxygen to tissues was the proof that it could be the remains of red blood cells. The professor said while spheres did not identically examine, so it can be any other thing like reddish mineral.
Finally, scientists performed a test on the fossil that showed that it contained collagen which is the main component of living bone tissue. The lecturer said it contradicts the fact because the last collagen that discovered was about 100000 years ago not 70 million years ago and it is impossible that collagen lasting that much. It could remain of the skin of the researcher.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nd rejects each of the authors proofs. The author claims that in the breaking foss...
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Line 2, column 172, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... where blood vessels were once located. the presence of a soft, flexible organic su...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, may, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 7.30242825607 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 12.0772626932 116% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 22.412803532 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1285.0 1373.03311258 94% => OK
No of words: 262.0 270.72406181 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90458015267 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62560675106 2.5805825403 102% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 145.348785872 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545801526718 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 388.8 419.366225166 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9028715523 49.2860985944 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8461538462 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06452816374 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.27373068433 140% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350897042418 0.272083759551 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102496903217 0.0996497079465 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.194453154183 0.0662205650399 294% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209025459064 0.162205337803 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.205333971593 0.0443174109184 463% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.3589403974 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.42419426049 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 63.6247240618 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.