Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only do what they know how to do well.
The word success for every person has different meanings but in general, a person who is a pioneer in his or her field consider as a prosperous one. People all over the world looking and following people who are successful and find the ways they pass and become a golden person. When we look their way, we can see, although they use other legend's experiences, they don't go their ways and try new things. So, these make them exceptional. Because of this, I believe successful people try new things and take risks while others think they only do what they know how to do well. In this essay, I am going to explain three potential reasons.
First of all, most of the people don't want to face their fears and don't get out of their comfort zone. The most important reason for people who become successful is that they put their fear away to obtain more success and ignore their disabilities. For example, last year, I was in a marketing team in a holding and I was successful but I couldn't get a promotion, because of the lack of knowing English. I started to learn English as soon as I could. After one year I learned it efficiently and became a head coach of the team. All I want to say is that just by trying new ways you become successful.
Secondly, imagine you always go to your home from the same path, it may be beautiful or amazing for you but after a while, you won't enjoy the way you go and you won't know what happens around you. It is the same in your carrier and life. If you just try the one way, you limited yourself and cannot obtain new experiences. For instance, my friend is a teacher, he always is the best teacher in the city because of the way he teaches to their students. While other teachers teach in the same way to their student, he tries hard to experience new ways to teach his students. He is wonderful in his carrier because of going and experiencing new ways, not repeating one style.
Finally, the last thing I want to say is that, when you accept the risks and pass from new ways, you will gain new skills, know other people who are expert in their field. These make you find new solutions and improve your skills which brings you to a higher level of success.
In short, all I mentioned above was just a few reasons I could say. Successful people increase their knowledge and experience and skill by trying new things and knowing new people. They also accept the risks of unaccustomed ways.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in general, in short, first of all, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 15.1003584229 93% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 68.0 43.0788530466 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 450.0 407.700716846 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38888888889 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.6057793516 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34047689558 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 220.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488888888889 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 589.5 618.680645161 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 9.59856630824 188% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 3.51792114695 227% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3046970477 48.9658058833 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8695652174 100.406767564 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5652173913 20.6045352989 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73913043478 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290283202163 0.236089414692 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861712493274 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144678548159 0.0737576698707 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183051476355 0.150856017488 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113252071219 0.0645574589148 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 11.7677419355 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 58.1214874552 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 10.9000537634 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 8.01818996416 85% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 86.8835125448 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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