Do you agree or disagree? It is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago.
Parents play a significant role in their children's life. When couples decide to have a kid and raise them, they actually starting a new era in their lives and so many things will change just because of having a baby. Raising a kid has several responsibilities for parents like feeding, paying for health care expenses, clothing, and so many things. Parents' duties are not limited to basic needs, they have to be careful about children's mental and emotional health. Some people, including me, believe that it is easier for parents to raise children than it was 50 years ago. In this essay, I am going to explain three potential reasons to support my opinion.
First of all, nowadays parents are more aware of how to raise their children. I mean, since parents are more educated and learn how to face problems about their kids, raising children becomes convenient and easier. 50 years ago parents did not have enough information about problems caused by children at different ages of their life. Most ancient parents thought the only way to raise a good child is to obligate them to obey their rules and there was not friendship relation between parents and child. In the past, the lack of communication between parents and kids also caused discouragement and discontent for both. But now everything changed and parents visit a therapist or psychologist to get advice about how to behave with their kids and the connection with kids improved.
Secondly, I believe parents have more time to spend with their kids. Therefore spending quality time with the family decrease the raising problems. I think people who lived 50 years ago did not have facilities to make their lives easier, so they were busy try to doing tasks during the day. Due to lack of time, parents in the past could hardly make time for their children and raise them. With the growing technology and facilities made for us, now parents are able to do things easily and be at home with their children and spend that required time to improve and enhance kid's talent.
To sum up, as I mentioned above, fifty years ago were some difficulties which parents nowadays do not face. Parents are more aware of everything and educated to solve problems easily. I do not want to skip modern problems that parents face today but it is easier to raise a kid than it was 50 years ago.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ave more time to spend with their kids. Therefore spending quality time with the family d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, i mean, i think, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 52.1666666667 109% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1936.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 407.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43879742021 2.67179642975 91% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511056511057 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 618.680645161 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3338340944 48.9658058833 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.6045352989 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 5.45110844103 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38837515665 0.236089414692 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139489563755 0.076458572812 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126761172098 0.0737576698707 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276377730466 0.150856017488 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553265663948 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 11.7677419355 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 58.1214874552 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 10.9000537634 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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