image of Jane Austen
The reading and listening discussing the portrait of the Jane Austen, who is one the most famous English novelists. The article states that the image found was of teenager Jane Austen. The author provides three reasons for support. However, the speaker mentions that the claims made in the reading are not convincing and refutes each of the author's reason.
Firstly, the speaker mentions that in Austen's extended family no one has seen in actual Jane Austen. She explains that Austen died after seventy years, no one in her family member can totally identify her. So if any family member of her endorsed that the subject is Jane Austen is wrong. This challenges the point made in the reading that the Austen family itself has endorsed the claim that the girl in the portrait is Jane Austen.
Secondly, the lecturer adds that the teenage in the image resembles exactly to the Jane Austen is also not true. She elaborates this as she says that Jans Austen lives in a big family, so maybe she has teenager female cousins. All they look like Jane Austen. Or even her niece looks like Jane Austen. Moreover, the image made by her sister Cassandra maybe she resembles her. This refutes the point mentions in the reading that the face of the image resembles the Jane Austen.
Finally, the speaker mentions that the image made on the canvas, in which the back side of it there is a stamp of black canvas. This black canvas sold by William lag, and when they asked him, he says he did not sell canvas in England. And when his canvas sold in the England Jane Austen become twenty-seven years old. So, when the image been made at that time Austen is twenty-seven years old. This rejects the assertion made in the article that this image has a style of famous Ozias Humphrey and also that image made by him.
In conclusion, the reading and listening are totally opposing each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 186, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mage found was of teenager Jane Austen. The author provides three reasons for suppo...
^^^
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...family member can totally identify her. So if any family member of her endorsed that ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 319, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , when” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e Austen become twenty-seven years old. So, when the image been made at that time Austen...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 12.0772626932 157% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 22.412803532 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 30.3222958057 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 5.01324503311 20% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1373.03311258 113% => OK
No of words: 331.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68882175227 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17526435013 2.5805825403 84% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.453172205438 0.540411800872 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 484.2 419.366225166 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 3.25607064018 215% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 13.0662251656 153% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 21.2450331126 75% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5242117015 49.2860985944 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.6 110.228320801 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.55 21.698381199 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06452816374 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.27373068433 211% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.529303614424 0.272083759551 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193837619156 0.0996497079465 195% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147246550507 0.0662205650399 222% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.277336937216 0.162205337803 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.15579604955 0.0443174109184 352% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.3589403974 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 53.8541721854 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.0289183223 76% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 12.2367328918 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 8.42419426049 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.7273730684 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.498013245 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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