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Either subject of the lecture or the reading is pointing to the fact that what reasons had generated the Little Ice Age in many regions. In the case, the article alleges that there have been some theories which account for The Little Ice Age. However, the lecture casts a shadow of doubt on the proposed idea of the article in which it has been reasonably disapproved by the same source.

First and for most, the lecture brings of the view that interrupting of cold ocean currents occurred only at the Europe and North America. Whereas, The Little Ice Age was happened in the southern hemisphere such as South America or news land. As a result, this directly repudiates the article which states that the cold freshwater which was produced by melted glaciers had adequate effects on the Little Ice Age. Nonetheless, the lecture mentions that this freezing water could not explain this phenomenon.

Based on passage, the second critical fact is that the dense and black clouds of dust, which were released into atmosphere by volcanoes, had manufactured the Little Ice Age. Nevertheless, does the lecture assert that the volcanic eruption could not put sufficient dust in at atmosphere. These dim clouds of dust and sulfur gas just would produce vision effects, so people could not notice the time. Moreover, these volcanic dusts influenced on the color of the sun set and snows looked like brown and grey. Furthermore, the volcanic eruptions were not too strong which could reduce the global temperatures.

Finally, the lecture contends that removing carbon dioxide did not impact on the cooling of weather; on the contrary the article declares that diminishing the human population could eliminate the greenhouses effects and have correlated to the Little Ice Age. The lecture points out that after a short time the size of human population started to grow up quickly and they cleaned forest zones due to crops and farming. Therefore, this is not a compelling reason.

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does the lecture assert that the volcanic eruption could not put sufficient dust in at atmosphere.
the lecture assert that the volcanic eruption could not put sufficient dust in at atmosphere.
does the lecture assert that the volcanic eruption could not put sufficient dust in at atmosphere?

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