Jane
The writer believes that a portrait used as an illustration in an edition of Jane Austen is herself, while the speaker strongly disagrees with it by offering counterevidence.
First, the writer aruges that the fact that her family approved using the portrait as an illustration means that it is Jane Austen. However, the speaker strongly disagrees with it, because when the family approved using the painting, it had been already 70 years after Austen's death and no one saw her in real life, which means they are not qualified to prove that the painting is a drawing of her.
Secondly, the writer said that because the face in the portrait resembles the one in Cassandra's sketch. Again, the speaker rebuts it because it could be one of Jane Austen's relatives who resembles her.
Third, the writer makes the point that style of the painting shows that is was painted when Austen was teenager. On the other hand, the speaker disproves it because the canvas used for the painting was sold when Austen was already 27, which shows that the teenager in the painting cannot be Jane Austen.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
...t that style of the painting shows that is was painted when Austen was teenager. O...
^^
Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...hat style of the painting shows that is was painted when Austen was teenager. On th...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 7.30242825607 14% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 15.0 12.0772626932 124% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 30.3222958057 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 1373.03311258 66% => OK
No of words: 187.0 270.72406181 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86096256684 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 4.04702891845 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45882329681 2.5805825403 95% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 145.348785872 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502673796791 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 419.366225166 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 2.5761589404 39% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 21.2450331126 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.5425611773 49.2860985944 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.857142857 110.228320801 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 21.698381199 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1428571429 7.06452816374 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161099096882 0.272083759551 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981260632017 0.0996497079465 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875626671929 0.0662205650399 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117095363477 0.162205337803 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316953061254 0.0443174109184 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.3589403974 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 53.8541721854 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.2367328918 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.42419426049 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 63.6247240618 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.7273730684 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.498013245 118% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.