To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to the statement, it says that to understand a society deeply, one should analyze what characteristics its major cities have. I agree with this opinion.
First of all, we have to think what decide the most important characteristics of a society. One of these is definitely how people interact with each other. major cities have a large population, which means there are lots of people who will communicate with others. The characteristics of society are developed by people's interaction, not by a sole human. For example, in a small town where there aren't many people living, studying the town will only show that it is a quiet place. In contrast, if you research its major cities, you would be able to find how people respond to acquaintence, strangers and friends etc, for instance, either friendly or indifferently, which will show the most important characteristics of a society.
Furthermore, small cities are mostly similar. what makes society different is a major city where politicians, lots of people live, not small towns which are not different from society to society. This is apparent when we read various articles related to history. Historically, when we distinguish countries to countries, we think the differences between the cities where a king and a queen lived, which mostly was the major city.
In conclusion, to find what makes each society different from others could be achieved by studying a city which have large populations, who can build a society's own uniquness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 14.8657303371 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 58.6224719101 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 2235.4752809 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 246.0 442.535393258 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11788617886 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.55969084622 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00057555014 2.79657885939 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 215.323595506 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540650406504 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 704.065955056 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.6821747478 60.3974514979 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.8461538462 118.986275619 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.30769230769 5.21951772744 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.83258426966 186% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24517591569 0.243740707755 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847868902299 0.0831039109588 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692125922558 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141904992142 0.150359130593 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794600103514 0.0667264976115 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 14.1392134831 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 48.8420337079 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 12.1743820225 85% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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