Politicians should pursue common ground and reasonable consensus rather than elusive ideals.
Many people think that ancient Greek had an ideal politics system. however, when we look at the society now, it is also far from the ideal, in that it didn't allow women to have the same rights as men did. In this sense, what we thought to be the ideal wasn't an ideal, which means humans never have found ideals. Some can insist that politicians still need to pursue making ideally happy society, even though we haven't succeeded in doing that at all, which I don't agree. I think politicians should put their effort to draw common ground and reasonable consensus from citizens, instead of relentlessly chasing unreachable goals.
Politic is not only about making society better, but also making society avoid the worst options within a certain amount of time. if politicians have an endless amount of time, they might be able to find the ideals. however, there are always limits in time. that is why they have to suggest reasonable solutions to help people who want different things which usually lead to the opposite agree. if politicians try to realize ideals, the politicians must find a way to satisfy people who have opinions that contradict each others'. And we don't know how long it will take and we don't know if there is an existing ideal. that is why politicians should become the ones who mediate people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 14.8657303371 27% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.3162921348 124% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 58.6224719101 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 12.9106741573 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1086.0 2235.4752809 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 229.0 442.535393258 52% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7423580786 5.05705443957 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.55969084622 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3191514431 2.79657885939 83% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 215.323595506 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.4932671777 126% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 704.065955056 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0587933785 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 118.986275619 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.21951772744 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.97078651685 40% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17739287817 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633237380271 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0788541849872 0.0758088955206 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137453820343 0.150359130593 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0188220910505 0.0667264976115 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 14.1392134831 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 100.480337079 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.8971910112 88% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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