Like many creatures humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling In the case of humpback whales we may have found the answer they may be navigating by the stars much

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Like many creatures, humpback whales migrate long distances for feeding and mating purposes. How animals manage to migrate long distances is often puzzling. In the case of humpback whales, we may have found the answer: they may be navigating by the stars, much as early human sailors did. What we know about humpback whales makes this a distinct possibility.

Both the author of the article and the lecturer statements revolves around whether the humpback whales using the starts for navigation through their migration or not. Regarding the passage the author profoundly believes there are three plausible hypothesis which all together attests that these spieces use stars for navigation. However, the professor calls all the mentioned claims into question since they lack enough evidence to be considered credible. In fact the professor believes these factors are not connected to this hypothesis and addresses, in detail, the trouble with each point made in the essay.
First and foremost, the author of the reading states that humpbaks whales are intelligent enough to navigate by using the stars. In addition the text claims that these whales are highly developed in cognitive abilites which provides them a complex sensory system to oriente using the night sky. the professor repudiates this fallacious belief by refering to more strong evidence. accordding to the lecturer, other animals, like birds and ducks, use the night sky to navigate,while their brain is not highly intelligence;there by, these two elements are not connected. So this assumption is excluded and it is not convincing that humpback whales orientation has something to do with their intelligence.
Another hypothesis, presnted by the essayist, hold the idea that while this kind of whales go in the straight direction for a long time, not using the landmarks of deep open ocean, the definitly rely on the starts to find their destination.Nevertheless, the orator explicitly addresses this point when she states that the humpback whales have a mineral in their body called Biomagnetite. She ellaborates on this by bringing up the point that the animals having this chemical in their body, use earth's magnetic field to navigate.Thus the secoud claim is also ruled out as the result of stronger fact which is offered by the professor.
Finally, the author bring his arguments to a close by suggesting that whales use Spy-hopping, which is a rare action in animals, in order to look at the skys, While he actually ignores one important fact. Many other marine animals like sharks, do spy-hopping, while they do not even migrate.No surprisingly, the takes issue by this claim by contending that these animals use this action to not only avoid preditors ut also to hunt.He notes that the most important evidence that stresses on this claim is that the whales do the spy-hopping during the day, when there is no satr in the sky.Consequently, this hypothesis is also based on wrong reasoning.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, consequently, finally, first, however, look, nevertheless, regarding, so, thus, while, in addition, in fact, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.4613686534 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 5.04856512141 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 12.0772626932 149% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 22.412803532 192% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 30.3222958057 188% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.01324503311 279% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2184.0 1373.03311258 159% => OK
No of words: 421.0 270.72406181 156% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18764845606 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.04702891845 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95988301542 2.5805825403 115% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 145.348785872 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536817102138 0.540411800872 99% => OK
syllable_count: 677.7 419.366225166 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.25165562914 320% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 2.5761589404 233% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 21.2450331126 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 101.048995088 49.2860985944 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.0 110.228320801 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3846153846 21.698381199 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06452816374 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 4.19205298013 358% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140751644479 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530147500622 0.0996497079465 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459319222792 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0890550695611 0.162205337803 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0183626183364 0.0443174109184 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 13.3589403974 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 53.8541721854 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.0289183223 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 63.6247240618 178% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.498013245 141% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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