Many lives might be saved if inoculations against cow flu were routinely administered to all people in areas where the disease is detected. However, since there is a small possibility that a person will die as a result of the inoculations, we cannot permit inoculations against cow flu to be routinely administered.
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
It is important for people's life to protect themselves from diseases. Sometime a small prevention can save life from dangerous disease. So, it is important to take precision from those dangerous disease by taking some important inoculation.
It is known that about half of the world's population died in last few centuries just because of some diseases like plague, polio, diarrhea and so on. And those are the failure of world history as well as medical history. Still in this modern era of technology and innovation people are dying from various diseases simply because of prevention. In the third world developing country people are still dying because of lack of medical reason and so on. Nowadays its still a great challenge to save life's from various diseases.
There is a known proverb-"prevention is better then cure". Most of diseases like plague joundies could be prevented if some simply inoculation is taken. People are dying just because of those diseases. Sometime those diseases can't be treated with medicine and proper care. but some inoculation in the early life can prevent those problem from happening and save a lot of life. Nowadays people in developed country as well as developing country are focusing more and more on those inoculation. sometime flu can cause dangerous for health and people can die because of flu. A early inoculation may prevent from those flu.
Still it is very hard for some country's to focus on those problem because they have to focus on other more serious problem . Some time it's take a lot of money and efford for administration to do this things. And people are dying other's serious diseases instead of flu. As long as people are concision about those diseases like flu they will not be infected with those flu.
At the end, it will be wise to focus to those flu problem as they can damage a serious health problem for health. Life is valuable and anmisitration should focus on those problem.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 36, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'worlds'' or 'world's'?
Suggestion: worlds'; world's
.... It is known that about half of the worlds population died in last few centuries j...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...rld history as well as medical history. Still in this modern era of technology and in...
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Line 5, column 46, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
... is a known proverb-'prevention is better then cure'. Most of diseases like plagu...
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Line 5, column 53, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...nown proverb-'prevention is better then cure'. Most of diseases like plagu...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'Most of', you should use 'the' ('Most of the diseases') or simply say ''Most diseases''.
Suggestion: Most of the diseases; Most diseases
...s;prevention is better then cure'. Most of diseases like plague joundies could be prevented...
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Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...those diseases. Sometime those diseases cant be treated with medicine and proper car...
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Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
... treated with medicine and proper care. but some inoculation in the early life can ...
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Line 5, column 335, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...oculation in the early life can prevent those problem from happening and save a lot of life. ...
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Line 5, column 485, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this inoculation' or 'those inoculations'?
Suggestion: this inoculation; those inoculations
...g country are focusing more and more on those inoculation. sometime flu can cause dangerous for h...
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Line 5, column 504, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Sometime
...ing more and more on those inoculation. sometime flu can cause dangerous for health and ...
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Line 5, column 583, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'An' instead of 'A' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: An
...alth and people can die because of flu. A early inoculation may prevent from thos...
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Line 5, column 620, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this flu' or 'those flus'?
Suggestion: this flu; those flus
...u. A early inoculation may prevent from those flu. Still it is very hard for some coun...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Still,
...culation may prevent from those flu. Still it is very hard for some countrys to fo...
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Line 7, column 53, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...very hard for some countrys to focus on those problem because they have to focus on other mor...
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Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...e to focus on other more serious problem . Some time its take a lot of money and e...
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Line 7, column 196, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ney and efford for administration to do this things. And people are dying others ser...
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Line 7, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...others serious diseases instead of flu. As long as people are concision about thos...
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Line 7, column 363, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this flu' or 'those flus'?
Suggestion: this flu; those flus
...like flu they will not be infected with those flu. At the end, it will be wise to focu...
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Line 9, column 41, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this flu' or 'those flus'?
Suggestion: this flu; those flus
...At the end, it will be wise to focus to those flu problem as they can damage a serious he...
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Line 9, column 166, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'those problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; those problems
...uable and anmisitration should focus on those problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, then, third, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.4613686534 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 12.0772626932 8% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.01324503311 239% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1635.0 1373.03311258 119% => OK
No of words: 330.0 270.72406181 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95454545455 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73703340309 2.5805825403 106% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 145.348785872 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.448484848485 0.540411800872 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 419.366225166 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.51434878587 198% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 13.0662251656 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 21.2450331126 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.4879514166 49.2860985944 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3181818182 110.228320801 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 21.698381199 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.45454545455 7.06452816374 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 4.19205298013 477% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 4.33554083885 254% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 4.45695364238 202% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142003065545 0.272083759551 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548128057957 0.0996497079465 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0459333331849 0.0662205650399 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864763931195 0.162205337803 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324301816182 0.0443174109184 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.3589403974 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 53.8541721854 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.0289183223 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.2367328918 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 8.42419426049 81% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.498013245 76% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.2008830022 62% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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