Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what type of neighbor is the best to have?
• someone who is quiet
• someone who we are similar to
• someone who is supportive
Use specific details and examples in your answer.
The discussion is about whether or not having which qualities make a neighbor better one. Personally, I believe that silent and supportive people are best one who live our around. I feel this way for several reasons, which I will explore in my following essay.
To begin with, being noisy might annoy your neighbors. Because the may sleep or work in that time. Drawing my own experience, due to pandemic conditions, I arranged my meeting at home and in the middle of meeting, I heard some loud noise from neighbor of mine who had been living in upper floor. They had decided to organize a party for one of them birthday. This disrupt my meeting and it was not productive for me, because sometimes, I was not able to talk and even with headset I could not hear speech of speakers. In addition, albeit it may not seem usual event, in a daily life this noise may interrupt your sleep, which have great influences our mood during the day, and cause to uncofortable circumstances even when we would like to relax. Therefore, being carefully to not annoy others is one of the valuable qualities of neighbors.
Secondly, spending a lot of time in one place where we feel safe and more friendly than other relationships in our work life is required being supportive in our difficulties for living more trustable conditions. When we like and trust our neighbors, this cause to feel safer and if we face with some trouble, we could be assure that there are someone who could help. For instance, once in midnight I heard voices like someone want to try open the door. I was full of doubt that rubbish could happen anytime, I called my neighbor and told him what was happening. Because, I was alone, he helped me and called police. Additionally, he supported me emotionally, gave me some water and calmed me because of my nervousness. That is why, having supportive neighbors one of important factors to build healthy relationship between each other and make trustworthy environment.
In the light of aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that environment that we live permanently is significant to safe and kind for feeling well and comfortable. Therefore, to live in these conditions, the most important thing that generate the respecful and nice relationships between each other.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
The discussion is about whether or not having which qualities make a neighbor ...
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Line 1, column 147, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the best'.
Suggestion: are the best
...lieve that silent and supportive people are best one who live our around. I feel this wa...
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Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ddle of meeting, I heard some loud noise from neighbor of mine who had been livin...
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Line 3, column 426, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'wants'.
Suggestion: wants
...in midnight I heard voices like someone want to try open the door. I was full of dou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for instance, i feel, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.4613686534 163% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 5.04856512141 198% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 22.412803532 254% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 30.3222958057 158% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1889.0 1373.03311258 138% => OK
No of words: 390.0 270.72406181 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84358974359 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.04702891845 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79903359861 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 145.348785872 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548717948718 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 595.8 419.366225166 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 3.25607064018 491% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 13.0662251656 145% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1188289362 49.2860985944 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4210526316 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5263157895 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05263157895 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 4.33554083885 277% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183751137254 0.272083759551 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510529347567 0.0996497079465 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0572036956416 0.0662205650399 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109858653292 0.162205337803 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048990479598 0.0443174109184 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.3589403974 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.2367328918 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.42419426049 92% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 63.6247240618 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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