online program are better or offline program

Essay topics:

online program are better or offline program.

The article is about which program is better, online program or traditional offline campus program. The article holds opinion that traditional program are better in contrast lecture opposes each claim made by author.

To begin with the author claim that online program do not offer one-on-one interaction. The professor sees flaw in this opinion and stated that one-on-one interaction depends on students choice. To carry on his opinion the professor also mentioned the ways in which online program can manage interaction; via email, and phone call.

The other claim which author put on online classes is that online program has credited scores easily. While opposing this statement professor explained that online program maintain the same standard as of off campus. To illustrate this the professor gave his example and stated that when he was in a college, they had to study 20 program, them some students pursued online program as of prejudice, that would be easy. Later same students came up with complain that online program require lot of discipline, time management and learn how to work with technology which could be so easily done in off campus as everything was scheduled in classroom.

The another claim made in article is that top schools do not offer online courses and further students find difficulty in admission in colleges as they did their earlier education from online program. In this the professor stated that this is not true and stated example of princeton, which has off campus and online program. Many students purchase its online program as this is well known and has good reviews.

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Average: 7.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ine program has credited scores easily. While opposing this statement professor expla...
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Line 5, column 331, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'program' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'programs'.
Suggestion: programs
... was in a college, they had to study 20 program, them some students pursued online prog...
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Line 7, column 285, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ot true and stated example of princeton, which has off campus and online program....
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Line 7, column 297, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'offed'.
Suggestion: offed
...stated example of princeton, which has off campus and online program. Many student...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, while, in contrast, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 12.0772626932 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 22.412803532 107% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.01324503311 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1373.03311258 99% => OK
No of words: 264.0 270.72406181 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47549978258 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530303030303 0.540411800872 98% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 419.366225166 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 5.0 8.23620309051 61% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5965991844 49.2860985944 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0 110.228320801 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 21.698381199 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.500575296967 0.272083759551 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.230382687326 0.0996497079465 231% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.163755536028 0.0662205650399 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.348262324484 0.162205337803 215% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142931534463 0.0443174109184 323% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.2367328918 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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