People should sometimes do things that they do not enjoy doing.
I strongly believe that people should do whatever they think it is well-suited for them. Performing a job which you are uncomfortable with could be so much annoying. However, nowadays there are so many reasons that people do jobs which they don’t like.
First, people may perform something because of their financial status. For example, one of my friends was an accountant and he hated the job but he continues its career anyway. This made me very curious and I asked him about the reason of it, he told me that there is no other job for him in city if he quit his current job and he is from a poor family that provides three other people from this occupation.
Another reason that can force a person to do an uncomfortable job is his ambition for achieving higher positions in his or her job or to get to a place which he have the ability to change the common rules to alter the job to something more enjoyable for other persons accepting it after him.
Sometimes people decided to do a specific career due to their medical conditions. As you know, there are some special and severe jobs that affect a person’s health. They must change their career whether they enjoy it or not.
Finally, performing an unbearable and tedious work may be not interesting for the persons that accepted it. However, it can benefit him due to many reasons which should be considered. If someone look at the bigger picture and consider all the influential factors he may decide to try enjoying his current occupation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 162, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...r her job or to get to a place which he have the ability to change the common rules ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 196, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'someone' must be used with a third-person verb: 'looks'.
Suggestion: looks
... which should be considered. If someone look at the bigger picture and consider all ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 318, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to try enjoying his current occupation.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, finally, first, however, if, look, may, so, well, for example, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.4613686534 105% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 5.04856512141 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 7.30242825607 137% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 22.412803532 210% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1373.03311258 91% => OK
No of words: 267.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69662921348 5.08290768461 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59772321778 2.5805825403 101% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 145.348785872 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565543071161 0.540411800872 105% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 419.366225166 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 3.25607064018 154% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.23620309051 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.7385893534 49.2860985944 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4615384615 110.228320801 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 21.698381199 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 4.45695364238 90% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201967756305 0.272083759551 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881980546841 0.0996497079465 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990051625374 0.0662205650399 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130101092493 0.162205337803 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977076023138 0.0443174109184 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.3589403974 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 53.8541721854 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 12.2367328918 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 63.6247240618 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.2008830022 89% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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