Question : Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

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Question : Summarize the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

The reading and the lecture both are about turtles species harming by the commercial fishing ships.The author of the reading feels that there are three possible problems implementing TED divice.The lecture challenges the claims made by the reading .Her is the opinion that these explanation are faulty.

First of all,The author argue that just a few of turtle have been cached by the net.This specific point is challenges by the lecture.The professor say that there is a tremendous amount of ships that every month cough sea turtles with the shrimp.Indeed many of them harm individually 100 or 1000 that is for sure not beneficial for the population.

Second,the writer suggest that there is so many techniques to be use to protect them. Limit of time for shrimps use is one of them. The lecture,however, rebuts this mentioning, the problems of the time limited could be regulated.The govenment can limited the use of the divice.Cheking and regulated the time underwater the TED is easy to improve.

Finally,The author posits that the TED in not a great solution for those largest turtle.In contrast the lecture position is we can crated a new model design of TED.he notes that the large is not a problem.In fact they can study by area what type of model fit.Change the size of this will be not a real dilemma at the and of the day

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ssible problems implementing TED divice.The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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...ssible problems implementing TED divice.The lecture challenges the claims made by t...
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...hallenges the claims made by the reading .Her is the opinion that these explanatio...
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...llenges the claims made by the reading .Her is the opinion that these explanation a...
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...by the reading .Her is the opinion that these explanation are faulty. First of all,The autho...
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...xplanation are faulty. First of all,The author argue that just a few of turtle ...
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...w of turtle have been cached by the net.This specific point is challenges by the lec...
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...ific point is challenges by the lecture.The professor say that there is a tremendou...
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...month cough sea turtles with the shrimp.Indeed many of them harm individually 100 or 1...
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...month cough sea turtles with the shrimp.Indeed many of them harm individually 100 or 1...
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...neficial for the population. Second,the writer suggest that there is so many te...
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... that there is so many techniques to be use to protect them. Limit of time for shri...
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... of the time limited could be regulated.The govenment can limited the use of the di...
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...nment can limited the use of the divice.Cheking and regulated the time underwater the T...
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...er the TED is easy to improve. Finally,The author posits that the TED in not a gre...
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...great solution for those largest turtle.In contrast the lecture position is we can...
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...at solution for those largest turtle.In contrast the lecture position is we can crated a...
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...contrast the lecture position is we can crated a new model design of TED.he notes that...
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...e notes that the large is not a problem.In fact they can study by area what type o...
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...an study by area what type of model fit.Change the size of this will be not a real dil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, second, so, in contrast, in fact, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 22.412803532 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1373.03311258 81% => OK
No of words: 229.0 270.72406181 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86899563319 5.08290768461 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82081873992 2.5805825403 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 145.348785872 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572052401747 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 345.6 419.366225166 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 13.0662251656 46% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.184530855 49.2860985944 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.833333333 110.228320801 169% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.1666666667 21.698381199 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06452816374 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117265147996 0.272083759551 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493525769574 0.0996497079465 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0340598956227 0.0662205650399 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651678678881 0.162205337803 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028789665122 0.0443174109184 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 13.3589403974 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.0289183223 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.56 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.42419426049 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 63.6247240618 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.7273730684 252% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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