uestion : Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

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uestion : Summarise the points made in the lecture, being sure to explain how they case doubt on specific points made in the reading passage.

The reading and the lecture both are about hail fall consequences and solution in Unites Estates.The author in the reading feels that doing some experiments in the area is going to bring the solution.However, the professor challenges all the points in the reading passages considering it unconvincing.

To begin with,The author argues that laboratory test are positive to find a solution to the cloud seding.the lecture mention that maybe under laboratory condition this is going to be success.Indeed the silver cloud prevent in the lab condition. In the real life the silver cloud work in any condition. the professor imply that if you see this and not rain is because is a lock of water.And that is not good

Secondly,the author suggest that the same technique used in Asia will be sucess are the Unites Estates farms.The lecture, moreover,robust this mentioning the enviroment evolve in this experiment in asia is different.It is an urban one with the pollution. this is consider a good inviroment.On the professor point of view a fresh no pollution enviroment may not works for the Unites states farmers.

Finally,the author posits that a local studies prove of positive cloud seeding in one farming area.In contrast the lecture position is studies locally reveal that the show a lowest of natural radiation. That can be a huge benefits for the local farming region.This is how the lecture oposses the reading passage.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e benefits for the local farming region.This is how the lecture oposses the reading ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, in contrast, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.4613686534 153% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 22.412803532 80% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1373.03311258 87% => OK
No of words: 233.0 270.72406181 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1330472103 5.08290768461 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.04702891845 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99779800931 2.5805825403 116% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 145.348785872 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545064377682 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 419.366225166 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 3.25607064018 123% => OK
Article: 9.0 8.23620309051 109% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 13.0662251656 54% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 21.2450331126 155% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 100.434362767 49.2860985944 204% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 170.857142857 110.228320801 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2857142857 21.698381199 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06452816374 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 4.19205298013 549% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 4.33554083885 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0971896426069 0.272083759551 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493249746081 0.0996497079465 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484750618324 0.0662205650399 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0607765153 0.162205337803 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323311866362 0.0443174109184 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.3589403974 145% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 53.8541721854 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.0289183223 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.2367328918 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 63.6247240618 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 10.7273730684 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.498013245 145% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.2008830022 134% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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