The reading passage and lecture are both disccus causes of sea otter declination. The writer believes that otter declined due to environmental pollution in Alaskan coast, he gives three hypothesis to illustrate his view. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She says, attacks by predators is the mainly cause of decrease sea otter popullation.
First, the author mentions, a pollution is the more likely cause of decline in otter popullation, he says there are many sourses of industrial chemical that could decrease otter resistance to life - threating infections and could inderictly cause otter death. This point challenged by lecturer. She suggests that, we do did not find dead otter in the shore of Alaskan coast, moreover, if there are dead otter, this is due to predators, that kill them therefore, they are seen in the shore of coast.
Second, the author argues, there are many other mammals also decline, that is indecates the presence of pollution. This argument reputted by professor. She states,however, the predators like ocra prey on other whales, but these whales extinicted, since orca need other type of animals to prey on, therefore orca depend on see otter for their food, this explain that extiniction of otter is from predators not from pollution.
Finally, the author elaborats on pollution hypothesis, he believes, the pollution explain uneven pattewrn of otter decline. In the other hand, The professors points out, this pattern is a better explanation that predators are the main cause of declination. She mentions, some places with tremedous number of predators, furthermore, some places have a large otter in shallow place, that explain uneven pattern of declination, this due to the difirance in the predators and otter from place to place.
The reading passage and lecture are both disccus causes of sea otter declination. The writer believes that otter declined due to environmental pollution in Alaskan coast, he gives three hypothesis to illustrate his view. The lecturer casts doubt on claim made in article. She says, attacks by predators is the mainly cause of decrease sea otter popullation.
First, the author mentions, a pollution is the more likely cause of decline in otter popullation, he says there are many sourses of industrial chemical that could decrease otter resistance to life - threating infections and could inderictly cause otter death. This point challenged by lecturer. She suggests that, we do did not find dead otter in the shore of Alaskan coast, moreover, if there are dead otter, this is due to predators, that kill them therefore, they are seen in the shore of coast.
Second, the author argues, there are many other mammals also decline, that is indecates the presence of pollution. This argument reputted by professor. She states,however, the predators like ocra prey on other whales, but these whales extinicted, since orca need other type of animals to prey on, therefore orca depend on see otter for their food, this explain that extiniction of otter is from predators not from pollution.
Finally, the author elaborats on pollution hypothesis, he believes, the pollution explain uneven pattewrn of otter decline. In the other hand, The professors points out, this pattern is a better explanation that predators are the main cause of declination. She mentions, some places with tremedous number of predators, furthermore, some places have a large otter in shallow place, that explain uneven pattern of declination, this due to the difirance in the predators and otter from place to place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 5.04856512141 59% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 22.412803532 120% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 30.3222958057 142% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 5.01324503311 339% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1507.0 1373.03311258 110% => OK
No of words: 287.0 270.72406181 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25087108014 5.08290768461 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.04702891845 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76965609564 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.540411800872 102% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 419.366225166 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 3.25607064018 553% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 13.0662251656 99% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 21.2450331126 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.149342853 49.2860985944 163% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.923076923 110.228320801 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0769230769 21.698381199 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06452816374 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 4.19205298013 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 4.33554083885 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 4.45695364238 135% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401551651575 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153591986776 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.179813915235 0.0662205650399 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284675505486 0.162205337803 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.286683081694 0.0443174109184 647% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.3589403974 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.8541721854 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.0289183223 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.2367328918 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.42419426049 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 63.6247240618 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.7273730684 103% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.498013245 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.2008830022 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
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