A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature novels plays and poems than they used to This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public for culture in general and for the futur

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A recent study reveals that people especially young people are reading far less literature—novels, plays, and poems—than they used to. This is troubling because the trend has unfortunate effects for the reading public, for culture in general, and for the future of literature itself.

While there has been a decline in book reading generally, the decline has been especially sharp for literature. This is unfortunate because nothing else provides the intellectual stimulation that literature does. Literature encourages us to exercise our imaginations, empathize with others, and expand our understanding of language. So by reading less literature, the reading public is missing out on important benefits.

the reading and the lecture are both about reading literarture.the author of the reading believes that reading literarture is declining day by day.he believes it will affect the future of literature.the lecturer casts doubts on the claims made in the article,she thinks that there are many other forms including science,history and political books beside literarture .anyone can reach these books and enjoy reading them.

first of all ,the author points out that rading literature can bring up intellectual stimulations and effects.it is mentioned that literature urges ones mind to think and imagine events and upon ignorance of literature people will lose theses advantages.this point is challenged by the lecturer,she says that there are many other books that are written in a very creative and superior way,that stimulates the imagination.

secondly,the author contends that books nowadays confronting low quality in its content,the article notes that some books are superficial and people are withdrwan with watching tv or other form of entertaining,which lead to lessen nation culture.the lecturer rebuts this argument,she suggests that culture can exisit in plenty of forms.including good music and movies .she elaborates on this by mentioning that culture is changed and contains other shaoes than only books.

finally,the author states that peopl tendency to read less literature lead to less audience and so less writers,the article establishes that publishers will no more invest in such qualified writers.the lecturer on the other hand,posits that reading less literature is the authors fault.she puts forh the idea that modern literature is very diificult to understand.that discourage readers to follow it.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, first of all, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 12.0772626932 141% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 22.412803532 138% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1373.03311258 107% => OK
No of words: 259.0 270.72406181 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.68725868726 5.08290768461 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.04702891845 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17212426551 2.5805825403 123% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610038610039 0.540411800872 113% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 3.25607064018 307% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 13.0662251656 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 21.2450331126 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 26.1378556886 49.2860985944 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 368.25 110.228320801 334% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 21.698381199 298% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.5 7.06452816374 276% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 4.19205298013 573% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150928301484 0.272083759551 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931575125563 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031608699738 0.0662205650399 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0931575125563 0.162205337803 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031608699738 0.0443174109184 71% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.7 13.3589403974 282% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.41 53.8541721854 -19% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 5.55761589404 286% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.6 11.0289183223 277% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.61 12.2367328918 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.44 8.42419426049 136% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 63.6247240618 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 10.7273730684 289% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.498013245 263% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 11.2008830022 277% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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