Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
nowadays,life became complicated and branched in merely every aspect.but is it important to make a collective and well developed plan to keep pace with this evolutional world?i believe that following a significant approaches will eventually ,in way or another,provide a spectacular way of life organization.i feel this way for two reasons,which i will explore in the following essay.
to begin with,the modern aspects of life gave us undetermined number of choices,including choices about your preferences in studying,working and even making relationships with others.making a definite plans will help you obtaining the benefits of everything you do.for example,my dream was about getting a good college certificate in pharmacy,i started studying about drugs and medicine when i was at college.that helped me so much ,i became more confident of my knowledge and assisted me in college years.it helped me fulfillin my dream and i could chose my career easily.
what's more,our time is defined as fast technology
time.you have to be able to cope with this ultimate speed and you can not do this if you were not aware of wisdom usage of time and get the best of both time and effort.for instance,when you get an interview for a job ,you may be asked if you work with a specific pace or just randomly.when i once were asked about this,i knew the importance of both planning and time management consequently.they want to get the best of your work with reasonable time and according to an obvious plan.it is unproffesional either to e enrolled in any work without a clear sheer perspective.
in conclusion,i think makin and using the right plan will help anyone a lot in this world,you can show how much you are distinctive and talented by following your own set rules and thoughts.i strongly believe that good outcomes need good inputs,and that including precise strategies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, i feel, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 306.0 407.700716846 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13725490196 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2735116478 2.67179642975 123% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614379084967 0.524837075471 117% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 618.680645161 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 76.0 20.1344086022 377% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 138.979315008 48.9658058833 284% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 393.0 100.406767564 391% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 76.5 20.6045352989 371% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 27.5 5.45110844103 504% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.5376344086 650% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198176846498 0.236089414692 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107785762291 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280188576729 0.0737576698707 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0879577847297 0.150856017488 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521823438499 0.0645574589148 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.0 11.7677419355 348% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -5.66 58.1214874552 -10% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 6.10430107527 280% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 10.1575268817 324% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.79 8.01818996416 147% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 34.0 10.002688172 340% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.4 10.0537634409 322% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 33.0 10.247311828 322% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.